Better than some creepyasta I have read. Dude, I nearly had the s# scared out of me.

Loved it!

Brr... creepy, but still good as usually stories don't really scare me. Keep it up :D.

That was really creepy... Cool though. I liked it!

Hauntingly... haunting. O_o That was wonderfully written. You're good at horror stories...

This story is very original, and a bit scary if you read it at 9:00p.m.
I think im gonna have a few nightmares tonight.

Oh, gods, that was marvelous. I just love your twisted and wonderful oneshots ^_^ So good!

that was great! i loved that! it was excellent, twisted and definitely original! plus the poem gave the one-shot a better effect on the plot plus i really love the poem!

keep up the good work!

Oh, wow.

Quite the intriguing story you've got here. Very original. I like, I like. It seemed a bit rushed in some places, but the concept and the way you used the poem really made up for it. I loved the creepy tone and the kind of mystery aura this had. The end was especially chilling.

This fic had me going 'woah' when the pieces came together. Definitely a piece to be proud of, Riquisel Yutifae. ^^ Continue writing.

Jess 0:o)

really good and twisted. excellent, loved the poem

wow it was twisted. It was so dramatic and a good story. The poem is cool. A little confusing int he beginning then i understood. You should make a sequel or another chapter. I know it's a one-shot but it's really good

That was a very beautiful yet frightening fic. I loved your poem and how you used it throughout the story. The ending was very creepy, but appropriate. Probably one of the best horror stories I've read because of the plot and style. There may not have been enough detail in some scenes, but that didn't detract from the story as a whole. Excellent work!

hi~ love your fic! nice, classy horror w/ a twist~