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| lara 2008-05-06 ch 6, anon. | abusei think you need to add some more chapters for this story |
| wolf steel 2007-06-12 ch 6,  | abusehey, this is a great idea for a B/A story but i have one little problam with it. why is the rest of it? i got really hitched to this story and now i want more!! sorry for soundind bossy but i really see more to this story and would like to read more. BTW did i metion this is a great story? |
| anna 2007-04-02 ch 6, anon. | abusewhy is there no more? |
| anna 2006-11-24 ch 6, anon. | abusewhy no more? |
| Lady_Shikon 2006-07-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseHello. I was just reading this story and I have to say, I really enjoyed it. I would really hope that you continue and hopefully finifsh the story. And I would like to ask my friends to read this fanfiction as well, so, can you add more chapters? Thank you, Lady_Shikon |
| Hezza62 2005-09-08 ch 6, | abuseCool bananas. But, as ur setting this back at Sunydale High, I'm pining for the rest of the Scoobies. Xand-man and Willster were great with the whole comic-relief thing. Even if they're still not with Buffy, I'd love for them to come into the story somewhere. But anyway, it's your fic, and i'm loving everything else about it. Is Ms Calendar with Giles again? |
| mystjade 2005-04-07 ch 6, | abuseHow long has this been up? How could I have missed it, After waiting so very un patientently? Brillent chapter(of course) Dawn geting kidnapped really made the story more intence, and gave it more focus. The way you revealed that dawn has been kidnapped was clever. And watching buggy panic while trying not to let the daycare teacher know the truth was moving and entertaining. I love how the person buffy phoned was Angel not Giles. Showes how close the two have gotten inspite of there antagonism. Looking forward to the next chapter (and Angel). I love how much chemistry(to use a cliched word) they have in your fic, almost more then they have in the show |
| Blondiegrl 2005-03-11 ch 6, | abuseI loev it update! |
| neverlookback 2005-03-09 ch 6, | abuseHey you updated ! Even if it is a little short, I'm all for it...just waiting to see what you have next ! -n |
| hi 2005-03-09 ch 6, anon. | abusefinish please or NOW! |
| Anna 2005-03-08 ch 6, anon. | abusehi i like tjhe story but there's is no way a teacher will just hand a child to a person they haven't met or even a letter to prove that they are allowed to pick their child up.. it just so careless of the teacher. |
| hi 2005-02-15 ch 5, anon. | abusereally really good. keep going P.L.E.A.S.E.!keep buffy in denial and then give him a surprise kiss which he gladly accepts. go write NOW!! =) also good luck at school |
| T.S.C 2005-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abusewell i was acually reponding to you needing help with writing a fight scene if you have any episodes on type or DVD watch the fight squences closely put them in slow motion and write it down then review it image whatyou want to see the characters doing the best thing to do this just before you go ro sleep make a mental story fight scene and let it play out in your mind or any time see it in your head see them coing just what you want them to and write it, that is what i do and everyone has always loved my writing think about |
| neverlookback 2004-12-12 ch 5, | abuseCan't wait for the next update...or if they train together and Buffy becomes surprised by his strength--that was the first thing that entered my mind with the ribcage threat. :) -n |
| melluvben 2004-12-07 ch 5, | abusei love this story. the part about her wearing his rib cage as a hat was hilarious. update again soon |