Despite the atrocious spelling in some parts I really enjoyed the twists and turns of the plot line. The story events were relatively smooth. Good job.

oh wow I love this story. Its unbeleivable, i have no words to describe this wounderful story. WRITE MORE!

It's called a paragraph break. Learn it, live it, love it.
What might have been a decent story has been rendered unreadable by awful formatting. A pity.

Nice story. Well written. Pretty spooky dreams. I wouldn't like to have such dreams. No way! I like how you put Andraia in the story. And I really liked the part where the singing ring took control...lol. Great idea with the lyrics! And the pokemon... I just don't know what to say about it. That was cool!
I liked the story. I hope to read more 10th Kingdom related stories from you:)

WOW! I loved it, **jumps up and down enthusiastically** it had everything a good story should! Hmmm... always knew that that ring needed to have all the attention for itself, but cripes, I didn't know it was capable of hostile take-overs!

That was an incredible story! Too bad its over. I shall look for more of yours

it was GREAT i lved it

That was terrific! I really really liked it. That was funny when the ring interuptted, lol! I just absolutely loved it. Cheers! Keep up to good work, when I sign in later I'll add it to my favorites!

Wow! That was really good! The singing ring and Pikachu parts were a little weird, but they were still really funny! I can just see Wolf wrestling aroung with a stuffed Pikachu doll...LOL! Anyway, awesome job! Keep up the great work! :)

*Katie*

That was FANTASTIC. I thought it was all realistic, all of it (well, maybe not the picachu or the singing ring, but that's beside the point). If there is going to be a 2nd 10th Kingdom, this would be a great plot.