That was a good start. I am guessing the assignment didn't have to be very long? That's the only reason I can think of for it being the length it is. I have just read so many more of yours that is even more tragic, emotional, and make me get goosebumps!

Like I said, this was a good start. Needed... a little something. Can't put my finger on what's missing though? Hm. Anyway, trying to be honest with you, :-)

awesome. ur're good at these!

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