fwakes47 2008-10-24 . chapter 24cool story |
Murkyskies 2008-08-30 . chapter 24This is quite possibly one of the best DHr fanfics ever written...i absolutely loved it |
L.A.H.H. 2008-07-28 . chapter 24Just because it's a different ending doesn't mean it's a bad story. It was very well written, including the French and Latin bits. I could tell it was very well thought out, down to the title, and I loved reading it. |
KoRnChildG 2008-06-09 . chapter 24That was amazing! I loved it! |
KoRnChildG 2008-06-09 . chapter 23Wow...
That was intense. |
KoRnChildG 2008-06-09 . chapter 19That was so sad!
"Odd, how the mind ranges, when the present it too horrible to contemplate. She remembered a story her mother told her, when Hermione was a child–the story of a woman who watched her love sail away, never to return. How she waited, day and night, on the cliffs where she had last seen his ship, facing ever west in the hope that one day the white sails would sweep the horizon, and the tides would carry him home. Years passed, until one of the men of her village came searching for her, and found a statue in her place, arms extended toward the sunset, and tears still on its stony cheek."
That reminded me of a song by Mana called "en elmuelle de San Blas" It's in Spanish, but there are translations to the lyrics. |
KoRnChildG 2008-06-09 . chapter 4"Perhaps Voldemort would appear next, and announce that his new life’s ambition was salsa dancing, rather than world domination."
LMFAO! |
KoRnChildG 2008-06-09 . chapter 2Great story! |
TenThousandFists 2008-06-03 . chapter 24Okay, who cares about JK Rowling's seris when compared to your AWESOME story. Seriously, this is way better than anything JK Rowling could ever slap together. You literally took her plot, her characters and made it into a fanfiction masterpiece and I THANK YOU for that.
Your characters have dimension, your final battle was brilliant, your relationships WEREN'T FORCED and out of the blue (low blow to Ginny/Harry) or BORING and painfully expected (low blow to Ron/Hr) and yea... I don't care. I would rather read 'Bad Faith' than 'Deathly Hallows' and 'Halfblood Prince'. JK Rowling should just give you her entire series, so you can rewrite them to go with this story. The whole marks and etc, was brilliant! LOVE IT! And some of the best Draco characterization I have ever read. |
ilikeitiloveit19 2008-05-30 . chapter 24great story! |
Hermione.Is.My.Homegirl 2008-05-24 . chapter 24WOW! This story was amazing, I definately cried at the end. The one thing I was left wondering about was how the saving of Dean Thomas and Hannah Abott affected the story and all that. But then, I don't know a whole lot about time paradoxs. Please keep writing, this story was definately one of my favorites! |
Jazziet 2008-05-17 . chapter 24That was just...LOVELY! I loved this story and who cares if the two last books don't really have anything to do with the story, it is fanfiction. By the way, your story was a thousand times better than J.K. wrote it, IMHO. That was a beautiful story, and I love how you focused on other characters. Also the fight between Harry and Voldemort was fitting and a fight that lasted for several chapters would have been unecessary. Either way you're a great writer and I really wish YOU wrote the books instead, :). |
bakanado 2008-04-18 . chapter 24Absolutely great story! It's not the typical Dramione story, but nevertheless one to adore! Your war scenes were really realistic and that's what made it so terrifying, but still brilliant... Congratulations for such a great piece of fanfic! |
rhapsodysenigma 2008-04-15 . chapter 24THIS IS AMAZING! You did a completely wonderful job and you should be so proud!! |
rhapsodysenigma 2008-04-15 . chapter 23YAY!! This story is going in my C2!! It's just so wonderful!! |