 silvia.elisa 2009-09-13 . chapter 24I freaked out a bit when Draco died.
Which is a lame comment, but it's the first thing that popped into my head. Anyways, the story is really really good! I have been struggling with reading sort-of-AU fanfics after the end of the series, but your work is amazing. I got very confused by the time travelling stuff, but that's the problem with time travel, in every piece of literature that deals with it.
So, thanks! |
 alliekiwi 2009-08-27 . chapter 24This is a fabulous story, and I think it was one of the ones that turned me into a Draco/Hermione fan. Thank you for a great read. |
 boats and birds 2009-08-23 . chapter 24Wonderful. Simply wonderful. |
 RedCinders 2009-08-01 . chapter 7Now THAT was a bloody sex scene! OMG...
I need to take a shower IMMEDIATELY...and find my boyfriend. :pants: |
 mon-ange22 2009-06-08 . chapter 24i loved your story! it was well researched and well written, and had an interesting plot. i also highly enjoyed your action scenes. i was glued to my computer until i read it through! nicely done! |
 Isa-Mikado 2009-05-30 . chapter 16"Je vais Y aller" XD the girl who spend her time pick out french mistakes... Soo No life... |
 Isa-Mikado 2009-05-30 . chapter 15just to say i love your story but you know willian is william in french too! ^^ not guillaume! And it's "Il esT mort"!
I don't think your french is bad!you have good rest from high school as far as i'm concerned!! |
 twilightfreako 2009-05-08 . chapter 24Ahaha, yay! (:
I loved the ending <3
Great job ;D |
 xDracoMalfoy 2009-04-14 . chapter 24Hi!
Your fanfiction is amazing.
I loved it.
I could not stop reading.
greetings, Vany |
 sarahr85 2009-04-05 . chapter 24very well written. love it. |
 silverlovedragoness 2009-03-29 . chapter 24Wow. That was really brilliant. I personally didn't think the ending was cliche at all. It fit well, linking the story together. And I was so surprised when I clicked the next button at some point in my avid reading, because the chapter number said "22. Terminus" and I was so shocked I had already breezed through so many chapters. I really knew Draco was going to die...from the beginning I knew that would happen and so I was bracing myself for the blow. But I found that it was NOT the end of the story. And I remember racking my brain, thinking, How in the world would you continue after his death. But you pulled it off nicely, albeit caught me offguard at first with the time traveling, because I had entirely forgotten about time-traveling. But as Dumbledore hinted to Hermione, I caught on and I was like-Oh! What a brilliant idea!
I honestly could never have pulled off working the chain of reactions with time-travel and honestly respect and bow down to any fanfiction author who can and makes the story actually make sense. It's a great feeling to understand the puzzle set out for the reader-regarding time travel.
Overall, I'm REALLY pleased to have read your story. I've added you to my list of favorites and wish you would put a better summary in so that it wouldn't mislead readers. The story is WAY more interesting than the summary lets on. :D
Keep it up,
Good luck with your trilogy,
~Silver |
 kittamalfoy 2009-03-28 . chapter 24this is the most beautiful and wonderful history I ever reed, you can imagine the magic in here...
I love it |
 silverlovedragoness 2009-03-28 . chapter 10Wow. This story was added to my community last week or so, and I didn't think much of the summary. But I decided to check it out anyways. For the last 10 chapters, I've been avidly reading. I must say, this is especially interesting. Though I'm disappointed that Harry and Ron didn't put up much of a fight, (seems out of character, to say the least) but I thoroughly enjoy all the humor. Especially the bit about Voldemort doing the salsa. That really cracked me up.
And more recently into the chapters, Draco has been endearing. He exudes a lovable huggable bear who you would just want to hold onto. And that works both ways-the bear description I mean. The words like, "crushed her against him" really elicit the immensity of his size. I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far, and look forward to reading the rest. Unfortunately I have to be somewhere now, and have to leave.
~Silver
ps-I admit, I was disappointed that the love seemed really sudden. But perhaps this story is just really fast paced? :D |
 David Fishwick 2009-03-11 . chapter 24Awesome idea and thanks for writing. |
 akyansha 2009-02-12 . chapter 1I know you wrote that story ages ago...but I find it highly accurate (Snape a spy for the order...;)and I just love it so I just wanted let you know that I really enjoyed it. |