woah so amazing yet angsty at the same time

beautiful

This was really tragic.
Such a sad story, but very sweet in a weird way.
Loved it, amazing.

Loved it! It broke my heart in a good way:)

You should make a third one that's about how Luffy andZoro are happy together now. Dammit they need a happy ending!

That went straight to the bone.

Sad. So very sad. Well, it was a pretty good fic. Great job. No exclamation marks, can't do it for a tragedy. The relationship between Zoro and Luffy is rather interesting, and you did a good job on writing about it. There were a couple of grammar issues, but other than that, it was a great piece.

Oh my god, that's so depressing, but you write so well. I can't take it. It's just so horendously fantastic

hah, i really just want to say, you killed him. how, why? you killed luffy first, by the gulletine, than if you aren't satified enough you go and off zoro too. truthfully i liked it, its sad that zoro is so lonely with out his silly caption. poor nami, you better go and kill her (go ahead) hah, well i just love reading your OP fics. i should probably keep reading the manga though. thank you dear author!QQ

so cute and sad...

God! You always ake these cruel... sad... utterly amazing stories, that can always make me cry...

I'm so subscribing to you.

Really Beautiful. I had Cried T-T

i'm simply...crying...it was wonderful and painful and so sad...

damn you! I'm crying! and my chest is hurting! and this fic is short! y.y

Finally, finally! A tragedy true to it's words! I didn't actually think this genre would be so hard to seek out a well written story, but sadly it is. D : I was caught by Zoro's insanity, and it's just so sweetly done! Great work on this! : D