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| syntic 2007-11-27 ch 1, | abuseFinally, finally! A tragedy true to it's words! I didn't actually think this genre would be so hard to seek out a well written story, but sadly it is. D : I was caught by Zoro's insanity, and it's just so sweetly done! Great work on this! : D |
| Falling Actions 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseGAH. *wails* It's the small things that make this so...tragic. The ephemeral quality of "Sometimes" in the beginning and repeated as you use sensory imagery to vivify Zoro's craziness. Gawd, and his knowledge that he /is/ crazy and he /wants/ to be in that state of mind - and the brevity just adds to the whole tone of this. Also, I love that you had Nami calling Zoro back because it just made Zoro's death that much more hopeless and desperate. GAH I just can't describe how much I love love love this fic as a standalone and as a sequel to Transformation so I'll just weep over in the corner now... |
| Ripuku 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseZoro's a psycho. I love it! You just made my day. Thank you ! |
| The Gentleman Jack 2007-06-03 ch 1, | abuseYou made me cry. Damn you. ~Dark |
| andicol 2006-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really hope he will be there when Zoro wakes up, because they shouldn't have to be apart. |
| Some Girl101 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuse*cries* Why do so many people write about luffy and zoro dieing? |
| Suffering Angel 2005-10-29 ch 1, | abusenaw. fits more as a sequal if you ask me, since we already have the moment in which Zoro's sanity gave up on him. And would you still believe me after all those reviews I left you that I admire you and love your fics? ^_^;; |
| Lenna Hunter 2005-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abusethats so sweet,..and yet so sad, keep it up! |
| Kloudy Reignfall 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's sad too. How did I miss this one when I read all the angst fics? I don't know. But it's not so bad. I can tell myself it's more of a bittersweet. I can tell myself that when Zoro wakes up Luffy WILL be there, and they'll stay together forever. But it's still sad... -Kloudy Reignfall |
| SnakeMistress 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuse*sniffles* a beautiful sequal. so beautiful. *sigh* beats romeo and juliet *grins* |
| Kuro-shiro-neko 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseaw! That is so sad! It's a really good fic. *sobs* Beautiful! *sobs some more* |
| internet junkie 2005-07-04 ch 1, | abuse*cries* |
| morgan. 2005-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful. Just beautiful. I love this. I most certainly love this very very much. So very beautiful. And I just love Zoro's and Luffy's relationship, it's just..beautiful. *sniffle* well done. |
| Pocky of Doom 2005-06-20 ch 1, | abuseFire Tears, why are you so good at tragedy? You've got me crying again. |
| Darkday Chaos 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuse... ((BZZT)) ... Pah, sanity is overrated indeed. Pah, I say! Stop making me cry, would you? Yes, it's all your fault. It's your acursed fault that you write such darn incredible gibberish. It's not my fault for reading it, no, of course not, are you daft!? Give me a cookie and I might apologise. Forget it, I don't want a cookie anymore. Lord, you're incredible. Keep writing, you daffy person. ... ((BZZT)) ... |