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Reviews for: Balancing Act
Micuko
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
aw, cool :D love the fic, I usually don't like LMxDM, 1st I felt really bad for Harry :| But in the end they were a happy treesome. ^^ will you write a sequel, I wonder what would happen? *_*
Caciquegoddess
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story; quite filled with angst but in the end actually quite beautiful. I find myself wondering what the future of their relationship would entail. Good work.
FullmetalMono
2007-07-09 . chapter 1
I can't help but say in the worst possible terms: this was really really good.

It might sound really strange, but when I started reading this fic, I had a massive headache. As I was reading, it disappeared, and the instant I finished, it came back full force. I love the way your story was able to distract me so completely that I couldn't even feel pain. Brilliant.

Admittedly, it made me a tad squeamish, but you wrote this in such a way that it didn't matter about the - in my mind - disturbing images that were presented; I loved this fic until the end.

Well done. :)
Chrystalline Tears
2007-04-20 . chapter 1
It was when Harry was when Harry was in the garden with Draco that I realized someone had mentioned this three-way before, and I can't help but think that this might be the story they were refering.

Anyway, I found myself stopping several times and slurring "Oh My God" over and over again, especially when Harry found himself naked in their presence. I had to actually stop and pent up the courage to keep reading. I think that's lovely that you were able to pull such a strong reaction from me.

The story was very well written and although I think I might need to re-evaluate my sanity a bit, I enjoyed reading it, it kept pulling me back in. Nicely done.
Savannah Marie
2007-04-16 . chapter 1
wow um...very well written...but i think i am scarred for life.
ura-hd
2006-06-12 . chapter 1
Interesting story.

I hope you will be back to HP fandom one day and write more!

Your stories are truly interesting and engaging.
emeraldwolf
2005-09-13 . chapter 1
wow. dude. that was intense. i loved the beginning, and the fact that you didn't start the fic with the beginning of the relationship. interesting characterizations all around, which is something i appreciate the most in a good fic. well done. ^_^
ura
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
I read all your stories posted on They are all very-very good. I would say even excellent. They made me think about them some time after I finish reading them. You do have a talent!

If you are interested in archiving your stories, I would advise you to post them at Potter Slash Archive (PSA). They have a good collection there. Your short stories would fit there perfectly.

The address of PSA is

Write more!
Aria DC al Fine
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
Harry's such a poor guy...Anyway, this is one hell of a beautiful story concerning huge rampaging emotion issues! And you say that this is unbeta-ed? wow...
girl
2004-10-07 . chapter 1
seriously,seriously twisted. but good. ;)
ura
2004-10-07 . chapter 1
Interesting story. Very well written.

Your stories are very cool in general.
SunGoddess1
2004-10-06 . chapter 1
This . . . was . . . unbelievable! I loved it even though it almost squicked me. lol No not really, I love Draco/harry and Lucius/Draco (I write both) So it was great to read one with all three of them. Good job!
Willowstar
2004-10-06 . chapter 1
Wow. That was... wow. I... damn woman! That was so cute! I wanted to laugh and ache at the same time! (does that make sense, cuz it really didn't to me.) I wow. It was so messed up, yet not, you know? It was twisted and beautiful. And i'm having issues with the whole Lucius Harry thing... Like, will that work out? Ok, sorry. At least you know that a great story always leaves the person wanting more. I WANT MORE. Except, you can't really do a follow up story because that will just ruin it, but i still want to... Wow, i'm not making any sense. Your writing technique is amazying, your vocab is huge, and your ability to describe feelings with completely unique metaphors is beautifully amazing.
I am in awe. ::awe::
Love
me
potter88
2004-10-06 . chapter 1
This is an excellent story. I've spent way too much time at work today reading it. I felt so sad for Harry in the cupboard. I guess I would have liked to know more about how Lucius and Draco thought, sort of like their POV, but I like Harry's narration and I guess you can't have both. Please keep writing! I going to recomend this fic to anyone looking for H/D.
Thanks-Potter88
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