*is still dead* XD

Excellent- the angst is heartwrenching... I truly *believe* in her pain... Its probably because Star is so beautiful and talented.

*dies*

Perfect. Aurorandromedalynikaristarstra is a very well-rounded character and I can't wait to see what hijinks she gets up to, with all her realistic talents.

XD

PS I wish I had her eyes- better than a mood ring...

plz plz update!

Just ONE note- Make sure that you over describe everything to do with her, from her hair to her shoes. One question. What happened to Yuki? Of course if she's still there, and Neal dumps her (for lack of a better term)because her realizes that Star is HIS TRUWE LUV (TM), it would complete the Mary-Sue element of the story. Once again, good job!

Splendid, simply splendid! Am I allowed to guess that she was adopted and her real parents are Jon and Alanna? I like the whole concept of a completely serious parody story, one that reads like any other story but still manages to poke fun at something. Good job!

This is suprisingly funny! I hate Mary-sues! Nice fanfic!

-WK

Ooh!

I like this!

Aur-or-a-bleh-bluh-erl-ya-da...

-faints-

Ky~

Uhn...umg...gnh...!

*runs away, screaming in pure, unadulterated horror and disgust*

you're doing this perfectly! i'm on chapter 3 and i already want to throttle Aurorandromedalynikaristarstra!

I want my chappie! Where is the next chappie! Please... it will get you candy...

... and I thought Katrina-Alyce was bad?

Omg wow...Star is such a perfect little Mary-Sue! With a perfect little Mary-Sue plot! This is so hilarious!

haha! please make Jon fall in love with her that would be so hilarious "we can't do this!" "Why?" "Because you are my father!!" *gasp* *gasp* *dead faint*