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| clarkson04 2005-10-23 ch 1,  | abusei loved it i dont know if there is gonna be anymore if so please do ti cos this is a great opener xx |
| hiya 2004-10-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseo... i likE! jess a tad of luv... verY good... but is there more? :> keep on writin mor stories an ill keep on readin |
| Anne 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood chapter, but I'd have really liked more romance. In the show Shal/Bren are always cute and very close. |
| MX Fan 2004-10-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseYep, think the same ... this needs more romance ... a sweet kiss (not sex) Shalimar and Brennan are a couple now ... they should be sleeping holding each other. |
| Nicole 2004-10-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice! But a little more of Shal and Bren sweet romance at the end would have been perfect. |
| alexis 2004-10-09 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved it... update soon! |
| Tracey 2004-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseMore Shal/Bren, sweet! This is good, you should consider writing more Shal/Bren fics. |
| MutantX fan 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's so good to see something new from you, I have been waiting for the third installment of the Goldigger trilogy. Are you planning on doing one? Anyway this was a good first chapter, and I can't wait for the Lexa and Jesse one. |
| Courtney 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really like this story a lot! I love Brennan and Shalimar stories! Thank you! Please keep on writing more! |
| MariShal 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was very sweet, nice job. I'll be waiting for more Shal & Brennan fanfics. |
| Rachel 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat job! Shalimar and Brennan are so perfect together. If possible write more S&B. |
| mfkngst 2004-10-07 ch 1, | abuseHey of course we have missed you, and this wonderful story is why! Wonderful portrayal of the characters, their thoughts, emotions, and relationships. It was realistic, fitting, and sweat. I love that you had both Shal and Bren, concerned about this new step in their relationship. Because they would have been. If the series continued. I can’t wait for the Jesse and Lexa one to come, as they are my favourite, and you should really consider adding these two together, and creating a story. Thanks for the great story! |
| Meg 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was such an adorable story. Makes me miss the show even more. |
| Fiery Feral 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat first chapter! Keep going! =D |
| viviana 2004-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseWELCOME BACK! Sorry for not being here anymore but it is amazing to have some amazing writers to enjoy while you have some spare time! Let's not forget that this is one trully great Shal/Bren story! Amazing job! I love your writing style!I can tell you that it was woth waiting! Just please post some more soon! I mean ASAP! It is great to have you back! Viviana |