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Lord Haller
2008-09-15 . chapter 1
Good!! A future view for the huge PoC story. Who are the girls with Ranma in the Amazon village?
Bloomer123
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
hehehe... this ius funny... plz update soon!
Rignach
2008-01-05 . chapter 1
I would love to read more about Ranma stay with the amaons and how it came about... and which god in mortal form do the think he is... I know he is Chaos, but the amazons don't. So do the amazons in your story have any goddesses and gods.
Jace
2005-12-25 . chapter 2
Weell there is one other probem: Tomoyo has a crush an Sakura. But if they are half sisters... well it just won't work out (not that it would anyway).
KH
2005-11-25 . chapter 2
please...please please...update this..is soo CUTE!!

I WANT MORE!
Chineseboy13
2005-09-30 . chapter 2
How I love this. :)
Chineseboy13
2005-09-30 . chapter 1
Cool. Explaining it in first person point of view is not very my thing but it's still cool story. Any story from you is good. :)
DarkBlueHated
2005-08-21 . chapter 2
OMG, that was so sad..

Sniffleness.

>_< boo, it ended.

Unpatientness.
DarkBlueHated
2005-08-21 . chapter 1
What the?

To be continued on Path of Chaos?

O, interesting. So this is going to be like a side story for that one big main one, hmm.
enlu-tarsonis
2005-08-03 . chapter 2
Well,

It's not really a Ranma Crossover. More of a Card Capter Sakura crossover into the Ranmaverse. Why are you posting in Ranma 1/2 instead of Card Capter Sakura?

Otherwise the story has a decent prose introspective approach. Not to dry to read, but not to much on the action or description of characters or on the dialog. But smooth reading none the less.

Keep up the work and I look forward to seeing more of how everything pans out.
Firehedgehog
2005-08-02 . chapter 2
yeah, another kick ** chappy!
aqualens
2005-08-01 . chapter 2
One of the most original CCS crossovers I have EVER read. The story-telling style of POV's from various different characters gives it a very unique feeling as well. This story stands out from many of the Ranma fanfics out there and I sincerely hope that you continue it and not let it fall into the category of 'abandoned fics'. This is definately going into my 'favourite stories list'.
Santtu-Chan
2005-08-01 . chapter 2
Heh, lovely twisted story and ending was perfectly evil. Keep going like that and you soon will be fully on the dark side of the force.

Few little mistakes here and there. Like when Touya talk about Ranma's glasses, I think the word is "use" not "remove".

Ah well, keep up the good work so people can enjoy good stories like this.
phoenix.ru
2005-08-01 . chapter 2
Once again, great work! Rewriting the same chapter while changing POV is really interesting ... It reads really well and I want to mark the skills of the writer ^_^Enjoyment factor 10 of 10 ^_^
P.S. Should we expect more stories from you?
phoenix.ru
2005-08-01 . chapter 1
A greate piece of story, that can be interwowen with the core story easily. Great job!
P.S. Of course, it can't be compared with the masterful work of Lord Rance himself ^_^
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