|Reviews for DD's Diary Entry|
| Dismayed 8/26/11 . chapter 1
Is this meant to be crackfic? Because taken in any other context, it doesn't make sense. 4th wall broken, incorrect background information, illogical backstory ... should I bother to continue? And DD, speaking several languages, would not make grammatical mistakes in her diary; she's fluent in English.
| DryMartini 10/7/04 . chapter 1
Hi! great story, it started out good, but maybe you could make longer chapters? I look forward to the next chapter!