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Reviews For: The New Beginning

racingfox
2005-04-24
ch 1,
abuseI really loved this story. Greg and Sara are my favorite characters and I hope that all that flirting that they do on the show will bring them together.
ScribbleDream
2004-12-22
ch 3,
abuseWhat is with the bold? It hurts my eyes. And the writing style is like that of a three year old. And they're out of character. I suggest a beta.
GreenMint
2004-11-12
ch 1,
abuseGreat story. Its real good. But I can't help but to ask you somehthing. Sorry, I am sometimes neurotic when it comes to grammar, but can you please add spacing and punctuation? You really didn't have to put one whole story into one chapter.

Otherwise, I love it!
MikaelaCheryl
2004-10-24
ch 1,
abuseaww, this is really good, especially the bit about the baby.

Keep it up.
Grissom's Monarch Butterfly
2004-10-07
ch 1,
abuseGreat Story! Keep up the good work! I think the pairing Greg\Sara it has potential.
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