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| racingfox 2005-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this story. Greg and Sara are my favorite characters and I hope that all that flirting that they do on the show will bring them together. |
| ScribbleDream 2004-12-22 ch 3, | abuseWhat is with the bold? It hurts my eyes. And the writing style is like that of a three year old. And they're out of character. I suggest a beta. |
| GreenMint 2004-11-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Its real good. But I can't help but to ask you somehthing. Sorry, I am sometimes neurotic when it comes to grammar, but can you please add spacing and punctuation? You really didn't have to put one whole story into one chapter. Otherwise, I love it! |
| MikaelaCheryl 2004-10-24 ch 1, | abuseaww, this is really good, especially the bit about the baby. Keep it up. |
| Grissom's Monarch Butterfly 2004-10-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story! Keep up the good work! I think the pairing Greg\Sara it has potential. |