Aw, that was nice. Hakkai and Gojyo are absolutely adorable!

I adore it from top to bottom.

This is so incredibly adorable. I love the idea of his counting the days :) So cute!

Very very sweet interaction between Gojyo and Hakkai. I love it so much. If I was a 585 fan, I'd be squeeing like mad and jumping up and down for half an hour at least. Damn you, you're so good, this fic gave me a 585 plot bunny. Must. Resist. XD XD

That was kinda cutem the counting of the days since Hakkai's 'birth' and the litle 'threat' of Hakkai's about letting Goku knowing that Gojyo suposedly prefers chan :-P. I quite enjoyed this, it was a nice job for the challenge :-)
Zell

fun to read. Som't realy know what to say...

Bleh, I knew I had forgotten something...

A sweet and touching story about Gojyo and Hakkai. Well done!
I liked the details, and how Gojyo actually chalked up every day since Hakkai returned.

::stares:: I love you.

::mad applause::

*snerks*

*looks again*

*snerks*

Olive oil. Oh, dear lord. As the Pixies would have it, "where is my mind?"

I like that. Simple. Sweet. Implied shounen-ai. You could continue with this idea and take it so much further, but why spoil it? If you add too much to a painting, you just end up spoiling a masterpiece. By the way, the dialogue at the end was just fine. Again, simple. And Gojyo keeping track of how "old" Hakkai is is a great idea! Wish I'd thought of it.

Aw...this was so kewete!!

How thoughtful of Gojyo ^-^

Waah~ I always love the Domestic Hakkai and Gojyo. And it's very rarely done this well! You capture their essence in their dialogue very well, and by the small actions they both do. The thing I love most about them are the little things--the ones normal people would do, but would hardly bring up, or that would go unnoticed. And they both pick up on these things.

Wonderful~

Stealing the title are you? Hmph. ^_^ You are the first to post for this challenge, too. This is a very cute scene from their early days of living together. Can't have enough of Gojyo and Hakkai together, romance or not. And as I said on the MB, I don't think Gojyo is childish, or immature, but I do see what you mean. Nice work as always. (Don't know how you do it.)

*Paisley skitters in suspiciously, glaring at Karot-San's ficceh and scribbles on the last line*

" Can I lick the sauce off your fingers?"

XD

I am a sick female. Very funny. Sorry for not reviewing on your other ficcehs, I have been so lazy. *drift* Where is this magical 42 fanfiction thingy? It could give me ideas...which I am lacking in.

But I have been planning one for two days now. Should turn out to be awesome. Too bad it's an AU...BUT 58!

cute cute! good job, i liked it!!