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Lirazel
2006-06-20 . chapter 1
I love it. Absolutely perfect.
Otto's Goat
2005-10-06 . chapter 1
Not a Charlie-fan, but this was perfect-- kudos to you. Almost poetic in a minimalistic way.
C
2004-10-23 . chapter 1
Sweet. I heart drabbles.
Morbid Muse
2004-10-10 . chapter 1
Great job. You made the reader feel for Charlie even through such a short drabble.
Schnoogles
2004-10-10 . chapter 1
Hey there! Nice little drabble - I've been watching this show religeously and can't get enough of it, and I love Charlie espesially. It's kinda sad that he just let the CD go. Poor insecure Charlie.

Nice work!
CelticFaerie2
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
Very bittersweet. In so few words, you make the reader feel Charlie's pain right there with him. Very effective. Good stuff!
Cools McGee
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
This was very short, but you managed to put just enough emotion and feeling into it to make it a wonderfully powerful read. I would love to read more Lost fanfiction from you.
BedTimeMonster
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
Every word has to count and a drabble, and you certainly kept that thought in mind while writing this. I know how hard short fics like this are to write, but you made it seem effortless! A very interesting way to look at Charlie and his one-time fame. I'm glad he let it go! Thank you!
robo t
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
very good. short. to the point.
a world where bassists from bands are unrecognized shows theres some hope left.
The Bookbinder's Daughter
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
Very lovely. Every line is precise, yet poetic. You give a very clear picture of Charlie without rambling on and on about his emotional state. And it's in present tense, natch. Huzzah for present tense!

One wee nitpick, though: the word 'disc', coupled with the fact that DriveShaft seems like it's supposed to be a fairly recent band, makes the use of 'LP' to describe it a bit jarring. I've always understood that unless someone was digitally remastering an older record, CDs were just called CDs, not LPs. Of course, I could be wrong.
The Phantom
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
Very elegant. A great drabble for Charlie and his depressed thoughts.
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Bravo!
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~ Phantom
Brandytook
2004-10-08 . chapter 1
Aww, that was nice, to true, and really nice.
baileymag
2004-10-07 . chapter 1
Hi, BurningTyger! This was really good. (I might be a bit prejudiced because of your character choice;) ). It's a beautiful and very symbolic story. Let's hope that one day, Charlie can let go and find some peace.
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