 Lirazel 2006-06-20 . chapter 1I love it. Absolutely perfect. |
 Otto's Goat 2005-10-06 . chapter 1Not a Charlie-fan, but this was perfect-- kudos to you. Almost poetic in a minimalistic way. |
 C 2004-10-23 . chapter 1 Sweet. I heart drabbles. |
 Morbid Muse 2004-10-10 . chapter 1Great job. You made the reader feel for Charlie even through such a short drabble. |
 Schnoogles 2004-10-10 . chapter 1 Hey there! Nice little drabble - I've been watching this show religeously and can't get enough of it, and I love Charlie espesially. It's kinda sad that he just let the CD go. Poor insecure Charlie.
Nice work! |
 CelticFaerie2 2004-10-09 . chapter 1Very bittersweet. In so few words, you make the reader feel Charlie's pain right there with him. Very effective. Good stuff! |
 Cools McGee 2004-10-09 . chapter 1This was very short, but you managed to put just enough emotion and feeling into it to make it a wonderfully powerful read. I would love to read more Lost fanfiction from you. |
 BedTimeMonster 2004-10-09 . chapter 1Every word has to count and a drabble, and you certainly kept that thought in mind while writing this. I know how hard short fics like this are to write, but you made it seem effortless! A very interesting way to look at Charlie and his one-time fame. I'm glad he let it go! Thank you! |
 robo t 2004-10-08 . chapter 1very good. short. to the point.
a world where bassists from bands are unrecognized shows theres some hope left. |
 The Bookbinder's Daughter 2004-10-08 . chapter 1Very lovely. Every line is precise, yet poetic. You give a very clear picture of Charlie without rambling on and on about his emotional state. And it's in present tense, natch. Huzzah for present tense!
One wee nitpick, though: the word 'disc', coupled with the fact that DriveShaft seems like it's supposed to be a fairly recent band, makes the use of 'LP' to describe it a bit jarring. I've always understood that unless someone was digitally remastering an older record, CDs were just called CDs, not LPs. Of course, I could be wrong. |
 The Phantom 2004-10-08 . chapter 1Very elegant. A great drabble for Charlie and his depressed thoughts.
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Bravo!
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~ Phantom |
 Brandytook 2004-10-08 . chapter 1Aww, that was nice, to true, and really nice. |
 baileymag 2004-10-07 . chapter 1Hi, BurningTyger! This was really good. (I might be a bit prejudiced because of your character choice;) ). It's a beautiful and very symbolic story. Let's hope that one day, Charlie can let go and find some peace. |