It's not lame. I like it. Good job on the surprise and "the last but not least." It's also like "save the best for last," which I usually do. I like how you mentioned Aladdin's flying carpet. I thought Fuji's family would have known about him buying a plane ticket and flying to Germany.

gyahaahahahaha!cool and kawaii... some unusual and deep vocabulary there, I'm amazed... u've improved so much in everything. It's also more enjoyable now as i'm becoming familiar with tenipuri world. Well done well done.heheh... k then, cya in ur next fic .=>

Hey, you mentioned my name! Heheh, jodan, jodan. Don't mind it. I like the idea, and I won't comment on the structure or your word choices, since it feels wrong to comment on them.

Great idea, I hope you can come up with another idea soon.

Tezuka/Fuji..Squee!! That was so cool! I loved that story! It was great seeing Fuji turn up in Germany and having them love each other!

hm... i think diz is d best fic u've ever written. ^^ evrything's juz... rite! hehehe.. n ur writing style has improved much 2. ^o^ who gave u d idea of letting fuji be d last one 2 tell buchou happy b'dae? >;p (do u hav 2 answer it anyway? hehehe.. *smacked* ouch... T_T) ok ok i think dat's all i can say. ganbatte 4 d next fic ^^

Kyakyakyakyakyakya!!

Tezuka is so swet! Oh, how I wish Fuji would come to my house if I was having my birthday... But that wouldn't be happen, ne? *sobs*

Anyway, this is a cute story, and I really like it!

But it was very sweet, though... I really liked this! Poor buchou, worrying so much... ^^ But I suppose he was happy, ne? ^_^ Ganbatte!

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YAY! I wish I got all my birthday wishes... though if I did the world would be in choas... eh heh.. great ficcy!

nice. just the right length and casual.

Aw... that was sweet. Though a little obvious that Fuji was going to show up at Tezuka's door. ^~

Fuji's a big liar, saying he didn't bring anything. =P He brought Tezu the best gift of al... ^_^

U SPELT SYUSUKE'S NAME WRONG! It's not Shuusuke, it's Syusuke. I take this personally because his my favourite character! Shuusuke is a student from Ginka...the one who was spying on Momo and Ryoma in the first 30 episodes and I think that Tezuka returned from Germany before his birthday. Have u seen episodes 149? At the end of the ep, Tezuka arrives at the airport and I really wanna see 150, when Tezuka arrives at the training place. When u said 'boyfriend' it was too giveawayish and too straight forward. Its good though, especially with the note of time.

Sweet! I almost forget that today's Tezuka's b-day!
By the ways, what "things" are they doing in the end of the story? :P ( I really love TezuFuji pairing)