awesome

Beautiful.

This was a very impressive story. I think you really captured Miss Parker's emotions after the events in the movie. Sydney's concern for her was very in character, as was the way he comforted her without drawn-out assurances of support. I'm really glad you let Sydney take care of her.

That was a great story. Good descriptions, and it flowed smoothly.

I love your stuff and this is no exception.

very good...very sad :(

God that was good! Keep writing !