wow your story was really awesome I loved every bit, your an really good writer

I just read your story, A Second Chance. I really liked the way that you brought all of the slayers to Hogwarts and gave them their own house along with making the Scoobys professors. I hope that you write more HP/Buffy crossovers because I really like the way that you write them!

wow is all i can say just wow
Really like the Tara qoutes, more would have been amaizing not too much :D:D
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A few spelling errors, lots of places where your spacebar apparently stuck ...

I just skimmed it; I find typos too distracting. On a positive note, I did not catch any was/were confusion, but spelling should be easy to fix and should catch all the missing spaces.

If you don't have a spellcheck program on your computer, you can download an extension for Mozilla that will catch them in "edit document". Enjoy.

still love this story!!

Awesome story!! :)

Great Story!!

I don't like Dawn

Poor Remmy!

andrew and luna? so cute! well i'm an andrew fan and a luna fan so yay!

hehehehe poor remus

absolutely brilliant!marvelously written...i have no words!just keep up the great work...hats off to you!thnx for the wonderful fic!

I love this!
It's one of the best BtVS-HP crossovers I've read in my whole life! (Or at least since I began reading this kind of fics...).
I specially like the fact that you made a definitite ending, I so hate when some people not only end in a 'will-be-continued' stunt, but they take centuries to update!
Well, well done. I will so be reading some more of your work, if it's half as good as this one it will certainly be worth it.

Damn! I thought you'd bring up the cupboard! I'd have so loved to see that!

yo. You got ms office? coz it'd be so cool if you could spell check everything, some words ar just not the right ones o use in that situation, and it doesn't flow. plus there aren't any spaces between words which is not good as it thetermine whether something is legible - readable - or not. Otherwise,this is a really good beginning.