 Pavana Lachrimae 2004-10-11 . chapter 1Woo. I like it. It needs to be ironed out a little in terms of rhythm and word choice, but there are some really good lines in there, especially the last two. :D |
 Luv2Game 2004-10-07 . chapter 1Oh...deep. Lol. That's probably what he thought too. You know, at first I couldn't stand Seymour, but, the game woulda really sucked without him. In away I felt sorry for him too, but, I was kinda glad he was outta my hair. Good poem! |
 Lucrecia LeVrai 2004-10-07 . chapter 1Yeah, I feel bad for him, too. :) Thanks a lot for the poem, it was rather nice. :)) |
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