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Crazy Sardines
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
Nice. I read hits before... didn't know why I failed to review that time. Love this fic. :D
rebeccasanfujieijilvr
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
the end was funny.
Keriara
2007-01-09 . chapter 1
Cute XD.
Snowberrie
2007-01-05 . chapter 1
Uwa! That was amazing! I loved it! It was so.. awesome =D Good job writing it! :D
Deh Tennis Acrobat
2006-07-15 . chapter 1
Heh. ^_^
I so
Sushi-chama
2005-08-30 . chapter 1
*laughs* This fic is just so kawaii... *squels* Imagine... a preggie Fuji... That would be... FUN! >D

I love FujiTezu pairing... There's just so much love between them... ^_^ I hope you'll be doing more FujiTezu!
kireira
2005-04-29 . chapter 1
XD That was really amusing! I like the description of the team members' reactions, that made the fic so much lively.
Alaena F. D.
2005-02-07 . chapter 1
^_^ That was definately very amusing and worth reading.
Aisaki Sumi
2004-11-13 . chapter 1
LOLZ~ aw da typical Fuji lolz
Nightengale13
2004-11-08 . chapter 1
squee, freakin' squee.
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My god, I love Fuji.
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I mean, I love them ALL, but...
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pair Fuji with ANYONE, write it well, and he makes it shine.
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and this thing...the last line...::cracks up::
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God I need sleep, but this is so much better than sleep...need crack!! More crack!!
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squee, marvelous job. I could also comment on your great use of abbreviated sentences and really good placement of adjectives. Strangely, you don't use as many as it feels like you do because the rest of your prose helps it out too, and you place what you do use well. Also, your wit in the opening and ending, and talent in minimalistically drawing Kaidoh and Ryoma, to further indicate the whole room, in the middle is great.
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So yeah, I could comment on all that. But I think I'll enjoy the crack and squee instead.
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::SQUEE::
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~Thirteenth Nightengale
Hakudoshi-chan
2004-10-25 . chapter 1
AWESOME AWEsome aweSOME!
Am loves Syusuke
2004-10-13 . chapter 1
That's so funny...hehehe. But how can Tezuka still make Fuji run? *pouts* unfair. stupid Tezuka. joudan...I actually like Tezuka. Nicely done.
Sharl
2004-10-12 . chapter 1
Kya! I love Teasing Fuji...He's so adorable!! Make another one, nya! *got Eiji's influence somewhere*
driftingwanderer
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
short but sweet. nice job.
Ron Weasley
2004-10-09 . chapter 1
MAN...I almost died at Fuji's comments.They were way hilarious.
Well since Tezuka started it...he shouldn't have made Fuji run.Tezuka is eviil...

-RW
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