Very touching oneshot. Keep up the good work!

Yeah, you're right. Kira and Cagalli are kinda alike. And you showed Athrun's character perfectly. Well done.

t was pretty good. YOu get to see more of Athrun.

2luv green

that... was beyond sweet. it was so... wonderfully worded. you have a way my friend, a way with words few ever know exist. you have skill... use it wisly, it may come in handy... when you least expect it too.

Your story was recommended by a reviewee, and he/she was right. It is a good one. And I fully see why.

IT IS GOOD BUT DO A NEW CHAPTER!

wow..wow! very well written, and that is NOT something i say often! that was my favorite episode! and i'm glad i found a story on it..and even more thrilled that it was AMAZINGLY well written. please please PLEASE write more! this is too good to give up and leave! e-mail me and let me know if you do or do not plan on updating it..or if it's easier, you can IM me if you have IM..my screen name is animecatdragon

thanks a bunch!

anime_catdragon

e-mail- tora_anime_catdragon OR tora_animecatdragon

Wow, very insightful piece. How funny that Kira and Cagalli are actually related, yet they're all a family. Keep writing!

*squee* I love this, locker worthy! I've read it a few times since you sent it to me, and it just keeps getting better. I hope you keep writing more

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I like it alot you are really good.

great work. very sophisticated and touch on kira's personality. hope you'll continue writing abt this series.

cheers

That is just one of the coolest things that I've read. Short, simple, beautiful, deep. I absolutely love it. Just awesome. Do you plan on doing any follow-ups or anything? If so, please keep me posted. I hope to see more like it hopefully soon! hehe :)

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nothing could have

been sweeter than this...

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(sniff!)

Wow! I mean, wow! This is... exactly what I love. Friends, torn apart by war. Too many people take it too far, but I think you got it just right. The POV was awesome, but my only beef is that Athrun doesn't really use language to that degree of sophistication. Well, it's a very minor complaint in a very good story. I hope you write more soon.