Its hard to say why but i really like this...good job

I'm not usually a big poet fan, but this was pretty good. Keep the XL coming!

Oh, this is good. I love how the smooth flow of your words translates into a hypnotic kind of feeling.
I normally haven't thought much of poetry posted here, but you kept it simple. It's not bursting with descriptions, nor is it top-heavy with words.
The repetitive lines are good too. Very well written.

beautiful. i like it a lot. I think it very accurately can be drawn from Xello's behaviour toward lina in next. Really well done.