Please hurry up and update because I HAVE to read the next chapter before I go crazy!

One, thing that kind of bugged me... the part where Yumi "thought with bitterness". Can't she have just "thought bitterly"? Forgive me if I seem rude, but th at kind of bugged me. I still like it though. It's a good story so far.

NO! You need to Update! Pretty please with ownership of Code Lyoko on top?

sounds interesting...update soon please

you must update...i'm goingg tto die if yyou ddon'tt...

Actually, Todd was the evil one, IN ROLEPLAYING! He was annoying evil, and other unamable words. ANYWAYS, you guys must think I'm really weird. COOL CHAP!

Wow, mention about Arda and the evil watts I'm XANA the one Beverly talks about. Anyways, cool short chap see you in the next chapter!! Basically, in other words see You later! ;)

I like it, the striker team bit was funny. update soon

ow. i like this story. strike team. hehe i died laughing. update this soon if you can please!!

rena

REVIEW! I like this story :D

Role playing rox!!

A little short, but good just the same.

Hey! I like you.
"Ulrich" Pardon your French! (kind of an inside joke)
Role playing RULES!
Haha!
Wait, there not all heroes...Jeremie, for one once played soccer while he should have been saving the world, and Ulrich (pardon my French) is just a jerk who sits at the computer not doing any thing
oh! you should put Kat and friends in. they're cool.