| Reviews for The Great TieDye Incident |
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The Dirt 10/21/04 . chapter 2This is a great story and I like it a lot. Here's a little bit of advice: Make spaces after periods (Ends of sentences). Include commas in your story. Example: "Mac walked in sat down and ate breakfast" correction: "Mac walked in, sat down, and ate breakfast. (space)" Anyways, great story! Please Continue! |
Raifiel 10/20/04 . chapter 2Heehee! I got mentioned! I must say that you do a wonderful job at keeping everyone in character! Many other fic stress one atribute of a friend, and lessen others, but you've done a great job! Also, you've kept the fic 'in character' so to say. The fic parallels with the show in a way that it seems like an episode without getting too hecktick and downright supid! Great job! Rei & Raif |
PhantomGoDeo 10/20/04 . chapter 2This is really funny! I like this story _ It's about time Frankie gets some help w/ all of her chores, too... Even if it is the LAZY Bloo |
Kat the Writer 10/20/04 . chapter 2Kat: Gah! You fooled me in the beginning! Kitty: I wonder what Wilt wants...I'm gonna keep reading! Nini: Please continue! |
Old Frog 10/10/04 . chapter 1 Need to know WHERE things are. Who's the lone figure? How come Mr. Harriman left his office unlocked? Waiting for the next chapter! |
PhantomGoDeo 10/9/04 . chapter 1This is really good! PLEASE continue! I love this! |
Miss Understood Genious 10/9/04 . chapter 1that was in the "Trouble with Scribbles" eposode, right? well, anyways, i liked it allot! i can't wait to find out what happens next! Rock on, and keep writing! |
Kat the Writer 10/9/04 . chapter 1Kat: YAY! I LOVE TIE-DYE! LIVIN' IN THE '60S! Sorry... Nini: *rolls eyes* Please continue! This promises to be a great fanfic! Kitty: Oh, and the "Secret!" thing came from "The Trouble With Scribbles", although I'm sure that many people already told you before us. |
Kaliska Vanka 10/8/04 . chapter 1Mewdles! I must know more! What will become of Mac's shirt! Oh yeah...it's The Trouble with Scribbles that that came from, right. (i'm sure about a million people have told you already, but i thought i'd do it anyway!) Toodles, and keep up the good work! |
Tabitha The Nox 10/8/04 . chapter 1I likes it! Sounds like fun! You must write the next cahppie very soon. (Tye-dye is so awsome...) |
Raifiel 10/8/04 . chapter 1OH OH! I know! The trouble with scribbles! THE TROUBLE WITH SCRIBBLES! HAHA! *does a bloo dance* *cough* Oh, and a really good story too! Good job! Rei & Raif |