funny. Jim should sell classes on how to blush.

::giggling:: This is good. It's been a while since I've checked up on this. I'd forgottin how amusing this story was. _ Well, I'll check back in another month or so, or when ever I decide to sort through all of my hundreds of bookmarked pages. _

...haruka...from sailor moon?

::her face is red from laughing:: This is helarous! Pleeze write more & get it up soon.

Great stay I can't wait for more. _

Heh. Very funny.

hehehe...how kawaii

ok the 2nd chapter is as far as i go that was strange but good

More. More. More. Plese take my hint. This has to be one of the most hurmorus outlaw star storys ever.

Hehe... Nice chapter! I love this fic! I's so cute and funny! I think you did a good enough job on Fred! That seemed like him! So anyway, this part was very kewl! Great job! I LOVE THIS! Keep up the fantastic work!

ha ha ha melfinas drunk. jim shouldnt be so bitter, it's his birthday

Hahahahaha! Love it! I am a anime fan who has seen only a few eps. (Like one or two) of OLS, and loved it from the first time I saw it! Your story, though not the best...(C'mon, none of us can beat the original writers!) was pretty damn close! Okay, a total AU, a Mary Sue, not bad for a beginner! (haven't seen your name before) I've written quite a few ficcies, m'self. (None are on the 'net, though.) Well, overall, you get an A-! (Every Gene fan is totally worshipping you right now!) Be proud! It takes a lot to get a rating from me like yours! Good luck, ja ne!

Hawk @9

This is so kawaii! Please continue it soon!

good good good this is good melfina drunk... jim has a girl friend and gene... good good good

"Gene Starwind, inter-species breeder?" ROFLMAO! That's great! Oooooohhhhh... Jimmy-kun was *SO* kawaii in this! *Grins* GREAT! I LOVE this fic! It's too cute! And funny! and I LOVE IT! Great job on this part! Very kewl! The end was funny! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the excellent work!