wow. that's really REALLY good. You're an excellent writer!

Wait a sec.. what do you mean by that? By the comment of scars? I mean its a original but I only said its based onHikari and Tk love because then they know its based on my true life and that would I dont know what they would thing. thanks and your not that bad you know I bet my evil side is more darker...well seya feel free to email me or what ever...

heh heh heh

It's very well done and in character. I haven't seen a lot of short fics this well written around here. It's all kida cute.

kool! another story of Taiora! YAY! well great story, its funny when Tai didn't kno wat to do. sigh, anyways update soon plz!