Nice! While I did go back and re-read the whole story, I did it *after* reading the new chapter first. I didn't need to re-read, because A) the chapter stands very well on its own and B) the story really is memorable enough that even after a month or longer hiatus, I still remember the pertinent details.

You're doing a good job here - good characterisation and smooth plotting. If you keep writing, I'll keep reading!

I always wondered whether we'd see more of you. :) Good chapter, write more. I could rewrite that in chatspeak with some symbols if you want it to look like a proper FFN review. OMG LOL >:D

I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing this. It's very good, although I'm concerned for how this will affect the baby. I'm not surprised, however - Query has always been this way, and I don't see her being comfortable with the life they've found themselves in.

But no weekly update. Is everything all right?

Infinitely interesting. I wonder what's going? Who's behind all the villainry? What was Dee's present? Also very good job on the domestic life depictions the slow return to intimacy after something like birth was handled well. You really have a great handle on these characters. Bad Batman bothering the Nigmas.

So far, a very intriguing story. It raises so many questions...What's the black figure up to? Where will the plot take us? When? How? Who? ;)
I'm glad to see Eddie following the first rule of parenting: never accept baby gifts from the man that just kicked your face in, threatened your family, and ruined your cake.

Hi, Having read all your entire series so far, I have to ask. Who is it that you're thinking of when you write them? Jim Carrey or the original riddler Frank Gorshin, or just the cartoon one? As for me, I would probably think of the original.