this is very beautiful. I think your portrayl of Kenji is excellent. Giving him some of Kenshin's personality habits was brillant. I also like what you have done with Ayame. She seems so depressed. I like that she is following her grandfathers footsteps in becoming a doctor. I thought that was a nice touch.
I am worried though because you haven't updated for over a month! Dont stop! This story is just to good!

Flipping awesome. Very original, too... Me like, me anticipate more.

just to tell you on what misaoshiru was saying, ja ne is correct, and so is ken-nii, so you won't be needing to change anything. this story is so languidly beautiful that you can't help but flow with the insightful emotions of the fic. please update, i am already so looking forward to it.

What a lovely story. I'm not sure where you're going with this yet, but the tone of it is marvelous. Poetic and languid and so full of feeling.

A little too much on the big vocab words for my taste, but that's purely a subjective/personal response. The story is beautifully written.

I like the idea of Ayami's phobia regarding fighting. Nice insight on that. And I enjoyed reading about how Kenji's Kenshin-like attributes caused her so much pain.

And hooray! The ending is great. I loved the description of the "stranger". Very vivid and exciting.

You've done a wonderful job infusing this with grief, longing, and beauty. It really was a great pleasure to read. I look forward to further chapters.

Ahh! So good! I love this story... T-T Poor Ayame... Continue, I beg you! And who is the stranger, why do I feel (and hope!) it's Sano?? ^0^ Who ever it is I won't be dissapointed! Please keep up the excelent work! :D
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Intriguing. It should say "Ken-nii" instead of "Ken-ii" and "Ja ne" rather than "Ja na", but that's all.

Just a thought, but you may want to change it in your profile to "accept anonymous reviews". In any case, as much as I may dislike Seisouhen, so far this is definitely an example of what good can come from it. Just a few things. "sensei" is the suffix you were looking for in the disclaimer; "sensai" is a common mispelling. And the word for little sister is "imouto" not "imotou". I'm no expert at Japanese, but I have picked up these words. Also, near the end, please note that it should be "sang", not "sung". Other than these, you made few mistakes, and I do look forward to reading more. Frankly, should have more new authors like you.