Great story.

great story.

man, I really feel for Jen and Wes.

aww!great storie!Ok,I'm sad because Jen and Wes don't get together but they had a good moments!well I just love you unite Haley and Eric,Kira and Trent.And about Conner and Ethan was good too.But I'm sad for Tommy too he was so alone!(poor Tommy!)I hope you write another storie and please!Jen and Wes 2gether and 4ever!(Ok and Tommy and Kim too!)Very good job!congratulations!

aww...poor Wes.

I'm beginning to wonder if Alex will find a way for them to be together...and...is Jen pregnant?

A very sweet ending. While it's a sad situation for Wes and Jen, this makes a lot of sense, and I have a feeling there will be more to this. Also I liked the bit of bonding at the end.

The whole storyline of Smitty, Mercer, and Elsa was handled better here than in the series. Nice to see that resolved pretty happily. Tommy's thoughts were well done, both his welcoming the chance to have a more normal life and realizing he's going to miss the excitement of being a Ranger. Also your addition of Landon was interesting - I wonder if he'll show up in another story too.

I loved the ending. Anton's reunion with Smitty and Ellie was sweet. And I liked the conversation between Trent and Kira at the dance. Seeing Tommy's forgetfulness from the old days was nice too. I really feel sorry for Wes, but I get the feeling he and Jen will eventually find each other again. And Landon said he could help, right? Maybe something will come of that. Anyway, this was a great story. I really enjoyed it.

more please this is getting good, don't separate my jen and wes PLEASE!

So now Tommy’s out of the game for good. Is too bad, the

greatest

hero the Earth will ever see, pushed out of action. But at least he had

one

last hurrah.

This is so much better than how the show handled Smitty's story. It was nice to see him act like a hero and overcome his jealousy. I can't wait to see what exactly happened with Landon. And are Tommy's powers gone for good now? Write more soon.

more more!

Whew! That was a tense final confrontation, and kind of creepy with Hayley joining the dark side, too. Then, it was nice to see Zeltrax come through. Very nicely done, and I'm glad to see things come out this way.

Of course, Wes and Jen still have their problem, and there's the mystery of Landon, and where Eric and Hayley will go from here...

The scene between Tommy and Zeltrax was so much better than how the show handled the character's death at the end. But does this mean Smitty will return? Or is he going to be stuck as he is now? I loved the conversation between Alex and Eric too. Does Alex know exactly what will happen with Conner and the others in the future? Write more soon. I can't wait to see how this turns out.

Those were nice scenes of Wes and Jen and Eric and Alex - kind of sad, too.

Mostly I liked the way you had Tommy reliving Smitty's accident - first in flashback and then history repeating itself. Nice twist with Zeltrax, and a literal cliffhanger - great stuff!

Intense chapter! Really liked the fluff scene w. Jen and Wes.

It seems to me that that mountain side has more that meets the eye...