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Zell's Girl with a Pigtail 7/19/01 . chapter 2
great fic you have going here. please continue. i want to know if rogue forgives gambit. nice touch on the POV stuff. chaptah 3 please.
ty 6/28/01 . chapter 1
Oooh, you've got to continue this! I need to know who the other half of "them" is. Please? And hell, you can even have Logan go after her.
Anakah 6/2/01 . chapter 1
Awww i can so feel what she's going through... Personally experience.. Anyway, great story very sad though.
Jessica 5/8/01 . chapter 1
hey sweetie this is a good story.I wish i could just do that just pick up a suitcase and move on.(if only it was that easy lol).You need to continue to write these.they are so good.lylasthfoadsoiauteotafaeae
Ankle 4/30/01 . chapter 1
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
V 4/17/01 . chapter 1
Huh? Please write more alot!
Liz Parker 3/8/01 . chapter 1
Yo! Sis. That was really good! SAD ! But it was good.

You have to write a second part to it! You need to when you

get the chance to write a second part! Maybe you could start it

this weekend! Well g2g!
Diva 2/23/01 . chapter 1
Sis. Ya know I love it! This is a great story.
CrimsonGalatea 2/21/01 . chapter 1
you have to keep going!
V 2/17/01 . chapter 1
I don't know if that was supposed to be funny, but I laughed. And even if it wasn't it was still very good. Now that I think about it, it was more ironic than funny.
roguestar 2/17/01 . chapter 1
uhh, a little sort and confusing
Lady McClellan 2/14/01 . chapter 1
Um, what? This is good, but it looks like the middle a page of text.
the critic 2/14/01 . chapter 1
nice OPENING, now you just gotta get on with the story...
Sunburn 2/14/01 . chapter 1
::sniff:: very very cool. can't describe it. I wanna read the sequel! :)
Maelwaedd 2/14/01 . chapter 1
A little short, but do keep writing.
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