|Reviews for Detention|
| X.summergrey.X 6/5/13 . chapter 5
lol nice lunch they had, it would be comical.
| nekogirl017 5/11/13 . chapter 7
...why is this just a 12 chapter story about them in detention? My brain hurts! And I'm BORED! So...Yeah. bye bye!
| Pinkie of the 4th wall 1/21/13 . chapter 12
I am LOLing SO HARD! XD
| Pinkie of the 4th wall 12/9/12 . chapter 5
| Guest 12/6/12 . chapter 6
I love BB's when he found out that it was Cyborg who dyed him green. It was so real, I almost teared up.
| revolutionaryowl 11/29/12 . chapter 12
"I respect you don't eat meat… Please respect that I don't eat fake meat," Raven responded.
"Aw man!" Victor responded slapping his knee, wiping a tear from his eye. "That girl is just full of one liners!"
| team-dragon-lover 11/15/12 . chapter 12
Beeautiful. I loved it and wonder what would happen if slade was the teacher?
| whenyousmile13 8/17/12 . chapter 12
I LOved this story! Your a great writer :)
| Maliriy 6/8/12 . chapter 10
Yes that is my real name and I was abused when I was 4 my step mom hit me. But now I am 13 and everything has changed my new stepmom loves me and u r right seeking help helped me become who I am today a wonderful loving older sister. I want to tell everyone that no one deserves this and you can help by just helping people who were abused
| Starfan16 5/31/12 . chapter 1
I know this review is kinda late but THIS STORY WAS F***ING AMAZING! I even signed up for fanfiction just so i could tell u how awesome this was!
| tophitslister101 2/21/12 . chapter 12
this story is so cool! love it! please make more! oh yeah and please add some raven and beast boy in your stories please...thanks! keep on keepin' on!
| RS Fan 8/27/11 . chapter 12
You actually introduced me to The Breakfast Club. If it wasnt for you, I would have never watched that incredible movie, so thanks(:
Now, on with the review -
I really liked the beginning of the story, the whole concept of it . But althought the story is nice, the execution may have lacked. You could have extended it to make the story go at a slower pace . So we get more buildup in the story of how they became friends, like in the movie . Another thing was that when Richard opened up to Kori, i thought it was akwardly written, such as it seems so abrupt. Richard doesn't even know her at all but all of a sudden gets entranced by her kindness and tells her. I understand that there were moments where Kori affected him, like when she called him a Robin, but I just wished you put more background there .
In contrast, I really like how you took some lines from the show such as what Victor said in the end about Richard's girlfriend, or how BB won a giant chicken. The lines like those allow the characters to go out of character because when we get to those lines, you sort of remember who they are ... I hope that makes sense .
Such a wonderful story and movie as well !
- RS Fan(:
| fionagurls1301 4/13/11 . chapter 12
I liked this story. )
| Cooldude1904 1/17/11 . chapter 12
Way Cool story. I love it. The charater's personality was just right.
| dreaming.sapphire 5/28/10 . chapter 12
I read this story a while ago, but saw The Breakfast Club recently. I love this version. It was a beautiful blend of all the characters from the movie. The format of the story was amazing, the story itself was amazing, and I love the whole Kori and Richard thing; I thought it was more real and believable than Bender and Claire. :]