lol nice lunch they had, it would be comical.

...why is this just a 12 chapter story about them in detention? My brain hurts! And I'm BORED! So...Yeah. bye bye!

KEEP WRITING!

I am LOLing SO HARD! XD

Nice. :D

I love BB's when he found out that it was Cyborg who dyed him green. It was so real, I almost teared up.

"I respect you don't eat meat… Please respect that I don't eat fake meat," Raven responded.

"Aw man!" Victor responded slapping his knee, wiping a tear from his eye. "That girl is just full of one liners!"

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Beeautiful. I loved it and wonder what would happen if slade was the teacher?

I LOved this story! Your a great writer :)

Yes that is my real name and I was abused when I was 4 my step mom hit me. But now I am 13 and everything has changed my new stepmom loves me and u r right seeking help helped me become who I am today a wonderful loving older sister. I want to tell everyone that no one deserves this and you can help by just helping people who were abused

I know this review is kinda late but THIS STORY WAS F***ING AMAZING! I even signed up for fanfiction just so i could tell u how awesome this was!

this story is so cool! love it! please make more! oh yeah and please add some raven and beast boy in your stories please...thanks! keep on keepin' on!

You actually introduced me to The Breakfast Club. If it wasnt for you, I would have never watched that incredible movie, so thanks(:

Now, on with the review -

I really liked the beginning of the story, the whole concept of it . But althought the story is nice, the execution may have lacked. You could have extended it to make the story go at a slower pace . So we get more buildup in the story of how they became friends, like in the movie . Another thing was that when Richard opened up to Kori, i thought it was akwardly written, such as it seems so abrupt. Richard doesn't even know her at all but all of a sudden gets entranced by her kindness and tells her. I understand that there were moments where Kori affected him, like when she called him a Robin, but I just wished you put more background there .

In contrast, I really like how you took some lines from the show such as what Victor said in the end about Richard's girlfriend, or how BB won a giant chicken. The lines like those allow the characters to go out of character because when we get to those lines, you sort of remember who they are ... I hope that makes sense .

Such a wonderful story and movie as well !

- RS Fan(:

I liked this story. )

Way Cool story. I love it. The charater's personality was just right.

I read this story a while ago, but saw The Breakfast Club recently. I love this version. It was a beautiful blend of all the characters from the movie. The format of the story was amazing, the story itself was amazing, and I love the whole Kori and Richard thing; I thought it was more real and believable than Bender and Claire. :]