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dolphinabottle 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseSimple sweet. Marik and Malik are some of my most favorite characters in anime,and I think you've done them both justice here. I was really touched by the last line.
S. Chensu and Luff 2005-07-24 ch 1,	abuseYAY! I have to say, you write brilliant one-shot Marik x Malik stories! Somehow this is different to "Reflection", maybe because it ends on a lighter note or maybe Marik's acting a bit differently too... Good use of the flashbacks, it helped to give some important background to the story! And the ending was fluffy enough to make me go "aw!" quite loudly. Keep up the good work! S. Chensu x.
Aisho Ren 2005-03-12 ch 1,	abuseI LOVED it! It's so cute. Malik, I prefer Malik, being made of hate and still loving Marik(hikari).
Zolac no Miko 2004-11-07 ch 1,	abuseHm... that was really interesting. I love the way you did Marik, the way he talks and thinks, and all the "hikari mine" stuff. You have a very interesting and unique style. I've not read anything quite like it. I shall go read more.
treana 2004-10-30 ch 1,	abusewell, i didn't understand all of what was going on here, but it was still uber cute ^_^. another one of those one-sentence paragraph things, which i'm now becoming addicted to... =) it's a really original style~! ^^ i like the way marik called malik 'hikari mine' throughout this - it really gave the fic a defining style, y'know ^_~. and the constant theme of breathing was lovely, too. a little too short for my tastes, but extremely sweet so it made up for it... nods well, my rule is that an author must have at least 3 awesome stories, and a kick-** style to get on my favourite author list... counts back ...well, i guess that means you qualify ^_~!
CaptainInuyasha777 2004-10-18 ch 1,	abuseeyebrow weirdness That was odd. Hm. I guess I'm just too shallow for this awesome stuff to really get to me. sigh Anyways, it was great even if I didn't get it.
The Elysium Project 2004-10-17 ch 1,	abuseoh... so sad and beautiful...wipes more tears of joy from eyes Linh, you gotta stop with the sad stories...sniffIt's so depressingsniff Oh well. Everything worked out. I loved it! =^-^= MarikXMalik! Yay!So happy!does little dancelalala...oi bye!
animestargirl 2004-10-14 ch 1,	abuseAww. That was so sweet. I love that pairing. I think you should write more like these, but longer. That was so kawaii.
a song for jeffrey 2004-10-12 ch 1,	abuseyes of coarse i enjoyed it! that was also soo cute. oh hikari mine.. adorable!
Anime Crazed 2004-10-11 ch 1,	abuseThat was so sad, but really, really beautiful and full of emotion. It... I'm not sure how to describe it, but I felt something when I read it, and I don't get that very often, trust me, its a good thing ^_~ Lovely writing!
Ikumak 2004-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI give this two huge thumbs up! I really loved reading this n_n. Aspesialy since I haven't been on the computer in a while. PArtly form needing a break, partly form lazyness and partly from playing outside with my cousins. I keep on missing you on AIM don't I? sing anyways, great fic and hope to chat with ya soon n_n. Oh yeah and I hope that you'll feel better soon! ~Miss ya and love ya.
Mafdet-TK 2004-10-10 ch 1,	abuseI really wish you would stop calling your fics drabble...they really arent! ^^ great fic, with lots of yummy fluffiness ^^ great work!
Dark Magician Girl Hikaru 2004-10-09 ch 1,	abuseThat was a good fic, nicely done. ^_^ A bit confusing at first. I like how Marik refers to Malik as hikari mine, the possesiveness made it more dramatic sort of. They should be reunited in the series too. Glad you feel better after you wrote it. Wow! I'm honored that you dedicated this to me! ^_^ Thank you! Keep up the good work. See ya around. ^_~
SilverWing147 2004-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI'm glad you feel better. THat was a bit confusing but it was good, very good. I liked it!
Black Angel of Destruction 2004-10-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseAnother beautiful done oneshot! This is great! ^_^

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