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AliceAnthem
2008-07-04
ch 12,
abuseA I looked at the update date.. 3 years ago! You promised in this chapter it wasn't dead! Please keep writing this story, I love it.
jasmin flower
2008-06-30
ch 12,
abuseHey! This one's great so far! Is it dead? U said it wouldn't be dead but it looks like it's been quite a while...

Update! Update!
jasmin flower
2008-06-30
ch 6,
abuseThis is really good so far, the only problem I had on this chapter was the inability to hold down my laughter after having a line from one of your other fanfics come to mind, something about smuggling grapes...
fujifangirl101
2008-06-28
ch 12,
abuseLEAFY!


please update, i'm at the edge of my seat. honestly neji has to make a move...or sakura...which ever one first ^^

update soon!
PLEASE!
ChocolateFearie
2008-06-27
ch 12,
abuseOMG!
This is an amazing fic!! I love how you make Neji calm and collected on the outside, but still show the inner termoil inside.
I never even thought of a Saku/Neji pairing, it's truly genius.
I'd like to see a make-out session soon between the two, maby even a little lemon with your writing style! *blush*
Anyway, this is an amazing fic and PLEASE update soon! (peferably not in 3 years)
Larethiana
2008-06-22
ch 12, anon.
abuseSuch a time that you did'nt update this story! It's sad! I like those two pairings! and the scenario is interresting! don't give up please!^^
KitschDoll
2008-06-22
ch 12,
abuseIt's a shame you discontinued this one
I read all your other stuff first but tried so hard not to read this one since things without endings give me a sort of tick [read: gr] but it's a very engrossing story even without the ending and Neji's tightly controlled depression was a very interesting thing to read. I don't like things which take him and make him a barrel of sunshine just because Naruto handed him his arse on a platter during the chuunin exams that's such a blind way to write.
but anyways, another story just as enjoyable to read as all your others. I'm curious though in the authors notes for the nature of the game i think you mentioned another story you were writing that i'm pretty sure isn't on your live journal or ffnet it's a shame to think you've written more than i can read. keep up the awesome work and thanks for creating something miles above those of the fanfics I've accidentally subjected myself too, that turned out to be horribly trashy
silverstorm16
2008-06-14
ch 12, anon.
abuseHoly Crap! You have just blown me away from this world. Wonderful, no fantastic, amazing story ever written. Thank you for sharing your talents with me today. I appreciate it greatly. keep writing and please update soon.
MarauderGirl777(not signed ...
2008-06-12
ch 12, anon.
abusePLEASE update.
rmr
2008-06-07
ch 12, anon.
abuseI really like this story
its really good. I hope you update soon!
:]
rileyonline
2008-05-21
ch 12,
abuseZOMG. Three years since you last updated this story? Your insane - it's brilliant! I hope Writer's Block releases you some time soon hehe. I thought I had it bad :P. Update soon please :D
lalala
2008-05-19
ch 12, anon.
abuseah!
wat happened to ur promise to finish this fic??
it hasnt been updated for 3yrss
srsly u hav to continue
this is such a good fic its killing me
PLEASEPLEASE update!!
Sorrelstar
2008-05-13
ch 12,
abuseHi. Question: WHY HAVNT YOU UPDATED IN 3 YEARS?! Seriously? I'm dying here. Please update,
Lurve Sorrelstae
zeLda1771
2008-05-05
ch 12,
abuseI never really liked Neji and Sakura together...but you converted! Please, continue this story!
SiriusLuv17
2008-05-02
ch 12,
abuseMore? *puppyeyes*
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