wow...simply wow. This story is amazing, i love it so much! i especially love the ending, quite sad but i love it nevertheless. I love the way the story flow, the descriptions, the metaphors and mostly importantly, i love the emotions. wonderful job!

Wow, a good Neji Tenten story.

...this is a PIECE OF ART! I LOVE IT!

I'm perfectly disturbed. Quite nice indeed. I'm highly surprised at the complexity and the intelligence behind it, not your ever so normal NejiTen, or Naruto fic for the matter.

I'll be honest and say I was still pulling the string for some minutes after I stopped reading. Everything was so well crafted that I had to absorb everything in.

One hell of a work. Congrats!

wow

your writing is amazing!

i mean - seriously!

really amazing!

this was cute, too

nejiten lives on forever!

It's so sad. I'm really not sure what's going on for the first part. It's not really detailed on what is going on in the future part. She's leading her somewhere, but why did he kill her. It doesn't make sense to me. I guess it's that orochimaru put a curse seal on him too making him kill her. Why wouldn't she stop him. It doesn't makes sense. Can you explain better please? Over all it was a beautiful story. I quite enjoyed it.

Subtle, delicate, a thing of beauty to behold.

Evil Orochimaru...

Good story idea!

that was really sad, and kinda hard to understand, but i really liked it actually. it was good and well-written!! great job!! :)

...angsty.

cute
so they die together...
When Neji turned demon...
But Tenten never leaving...

i dont get it.

This is amazingly powerful. The imagery is fantastic, and the bits from Neji's mind--allegory and whatnot--were very Neji. The time changes were a pain until I figured out the pattern, but then it was very neat. *grins*

I'm opening a Naruto archive,a dn was wondering if I can archive this. If lets you see it, the url is

Or just e-mail me, and I'll send it to you. ;)

J

H-huh? x_x;

It was enthralling in the way it was written, but in the end, it just wasn't easily understandable - I don't think that it's that it went over my head.. I think that it's that it was too cryptic. O_o;

Wow. This is such a great story. Its sort of dark and mysterious and yet at the same time so clearly portrayed. I haven't gotten up to the cursed seal thingy with Neji, but I do know that he got cursed. So... Orochimaru was the one to curse him. I see, I see. Do continue to write more of this kind of stories because I simply love angst like this. :) And Neji and Ten Ten pairings rock!