Well darling, I have to say I'm rather disappointed. This wasn't at all up to par with your usual chapters. Usually I expect great writing to meet something that leaves the chapter in this divine cliffhanger that makes me want to scream. This chapter wasn't this. It was less mysterious than I expected, less cryptic. I do love this story, but I'm afraid this chapter didn't reflect your superior writing style. It was almost as if you didn't write it at all. Much love darling. I'm sorry for the harsh review, but writers must tell one another truth.

RosePetal

*sniffle* While this chapter was sickenly cute, I want Tatsumi with Watari, the way the world was supposed to go around. However, I'm also curious to what your take will be on the events surrounding their inevitable break-up. I just hope all will be well and Tatsumi doesn't do anything too stupid. I also wonder how you're going to develop the relationship between Tatsumi and the others. He always seems like such a cold hearted bastard. It's nice that you gave him some humanity. Lots of loves and cuddles!

Kawaii! That was super cute, I loved everything. I adore Mako-san. He's the type of person I wish that I had as a relative. Sorry about the virus. I know how that is. My computer is like a virus magnet. I have reformating the disk down to an art now.

D. Greyman is awesome! I wuv it so much. I hope that when they decide to do the english version, it's as good as the japanese one.

Vampire knight is awesome too. I've only watched a few of the episodes, since it's still relativly new. Anyhow, happy writing!

DMK

I'm so glad you finally updated! Now, we just have to have a little discussion about your other stories that I love...

Anyways, I loved this chapter and thought it was utterly cute. Tsuzuki seems a lot softer and that makes me happy, even though we all know that Tatsumi ends up hurting him anyways. I wonder how things are going to develop between them and how Tatsumi is going to screw it up. Loved it and you better update your other stories and this one soon!

Loves and cuddles
RosePetal

Yet another delight, as are all your stories! This chapter was sweet, funny, and revealing. Thank you for giving us such great stories!

Oh Tatsumi, you're always so in denial! I'm curious to see how their relationshiop will develop. I'm also eager for the story to continue and show the forbidden event of Tatsumi not being able to handle Tsuzuki's scars as well as seeing how Tatsumi first sees Watari. I love this story and I can't wait for more updates.

Luvs and cuddles (and mini muffins)

RosePetal

Wah! This chapter is super cute! Keep up the great work! I just love your story. -shakes head- Sei has NO IDEA what he's getting himself into does he? Poor thing.

DMK

Just as I thought. Poor Sei. I think that Mako-san will be a bit dissapointed when he finds Sei spending his night in the hospital rather than in Tsu's house. Anyhow, another great chappie!

DMK

Poor Tatsumi. At least he tried to be polite and eat the concoction that Tsuzuki made. Now we know why Hisoka won't ever eat Tsuzuki's cooking either. It was a very sweet chapter with a funny ending to it. I love this story, as well as the others you write, but I fear this one gets neglected sometimes. However, you still get hugs and cuddles because this chapter was absolutely amazing. Tsuzuki must feel so bad. His cooking actually made a guest pass out.

Luvs and cuddles

And Tsuzuki's cooking ^.^

Poor Sei! He's really going to get it when Tsu gives him some of that cooking. I always thought that it was so damn obvious that Tat and Tsu had some feelings for each other, too bad that nothing came of it. Anyhow, another great chapter! Keep up the great work!

DMK

Well, based on the events of Apocolypse (forgive the spelling), Mako is completely justified in his thoughts of Enma. Speaking of whic, you need to update that one as well. I loved this chapter, especially imagining Tsuzuki trying to help with all those receipts. I wonder how many of them involved sweets. I loved it hun.

Luvs and cuddles!
RosePetal

Yay, Tatsumi has finally met Tsuzuki. I'm curious as to how much detail you'll give later on concerning their relationship. Most people don't touch the subject, as if it's forbidden. Great chapter, and great job with this story so far.

RosePetal

Another great chapter! I was wondering when you were going to bring Tsu in. I love him so much, he's so freaking cute! Those puppy ears, kawaii! I was wondering if you have read the manga? I'm sure you might have already mentioned it, but I have a memory like Tsu, non existant. Keep up the good work!

DMK

I'm so happy that Mako and Sei got reunited. Yay! I was thinking that Sei's life was going to be full of a lot of crap, but you're having up's and down's like it should be, kudos for you! Life is never just a trial of sadness and torment, and you portray that nicely by adding little bits of happiness here and there. Keep up the good work! It's so cool you made Mako the second shadow master! Yay(can you tell I'm happy?).

DMK

As I have mentioned before, I adore all of your stories, very much including this one. I love how this story smoothly connects with the others, and is true to the manga while wonderfully filling in the many holes and hints left in the manga. Here for example, Enma's judgment and involvement in Tatsumi's life takes on a sinister cast true to both the canon and your other stories.