uuo it's wonderful, escribes tan bien en ingles como en castellano. te felicito es una historia de un amor para siempre.
concuerdo contigo los hombres son tan cobardes ¬¬ pero bueno, no podemos vivir con o sin ellos

This was beautiful , truly . Very Romeo Julietish , loved it . They died in eachothers arms, there isn't a better way . Wonderful

Rock on!

Slytherinswn

Beautiful. I loved it. For your first story in the English language, well, it was fantastic. I cannot speak much espanol, but I thought the story was muy bien, or very good!