Oh, sort of leaves me somber. Anyhow, great story overall.

Poor Sev doesn't feel love. Don't you just wand to squeeze him and say 'I forgive you! Come back into the light!'. Anyhow, great chapter. Sorry if my reviews are a bit sporatic in nature and usefulness.

Movin' on in...lalala. Sorry, I had a classics moment. Anyhow, great chapter.

Never interesting story here. And your first hp? In that case, extremely nice work, lol. Anyhow, I can't resist anything involving Malfoys or Severus.

You poor thing! Such lovely writing, and only two reviews?

Very nice. Be careful to keep Severus and Narcissa IC; they stray a little too far into the "nice" zone to be believable at times, but for the most part, very good. Severus would, of course, still have good friends among the Death Eaters, despite his having sided with Dumbledore.

mwaha there's a typo in your summary.

What did she see in his bedroom that let her know he was spying for Dumbledore? The only thing you mentioned in the fic was a picture of her so I can understand she figured out he loved her but where did the other discoveries come from?

A good beginning...please post more soon.

Good start! Hope you'll update soon