I liked this fic, especially Freya and Figgy. I love cat they're so cute! Anyway, you have a thing for humor and are a great writer please continue your fics and keep up the good work.

Nice chapter. I feel sorry for the cookies and Vivi. Fratley getting squished by Quina, that was funny.

MOG IS SO GODDAMN CUTE LOL. Well in the game anyway. WAY TO MUCH NARRATOR ENCROACHMENT JUST STOP OR LET UP A LITTLE PLZ. Still better than last chapter and getting alittle funnier. This coming from a 14 year old boi.

OK... A little of the same. Too much fighting and chasing around within the team. Overall too much attempts at comedy while not too funny. Narrator idea is retarded. I expectd betta after chapter 1.

gr8 start but u use a lot of phrases too much such as "they rolled their eyes" otherwise gr8. review my stories k?

laughs and steals all of the cookies* *pats Vivi on the head* Alas poor Vivi, we knew him well...lol
Keep up the madness!

Great job! Just as funny as ever. And I agree, "POOR POOR POOR POOR POOR POOR Vivi. Please update soon.
P.S. Thanks for the cookie hehe.

LOL!! Oh my god!! Tad was awesome!! Do u noe da muffinman?? lol! :D I juz watched shrek in sch! Lurved da gingerbreadman~ Its so kewt! (no! not da gumdrop buttons!) Wonderful chappie! One of da best FF9 humor fic ive ever seen! :D Keep updating!! WootZ!

This chapter is funny too. Lawyers, insane butlers, and Quina is as hungry as ever. Great job! Update soon.

*laughs* lol this is so great! ^_^

*laughs* "You can't steal Freya's catch phrase and use it as your own!" Loved that! ^_^

Keep it up! T3h more updating-ness is needing to be soon! ^_^

I like this story. It's funny. Please continue.

lol!! Dis is good stuff! Good and funnie stuff! :D I like it! I like it!! i like it! This is great! Im not kidding!! Update!!

-lollie

Why is it you are so much better writing insanity fanfiction than serious stories? This made me laugh!
You might have got away with little description, but this IS an insane story, read more for its comedy rather than a sensible plot. Look into that weakness the next time you write! I've been nagged about description and I'm not going to let you get away with it!
And about not having enough time, I hear that as quite a common excuse from authors who update every other year, but I update regularly and my stories are fairly long.
Update soon.