your one-shots are supurb, this is one but you shouldn't give up on

yes...I am back...you can not be rid of me! I'll review your other fanfics too! XD Cloud wants to kill Sephiroth, even though he loves him?! ...confusing...

okies Cloud! I'll be sure to tell Sephy you're lookin' for him!

I like this a lot. Your prose is smooth and ellagant, it reflects the emotions of the character extreemly well. Its nice to see stuff on this site that isn't just a bunch of crap written to fuflill the fantisy's of wannabe writers.
So long
Blackcat Hanyou

Short...yet so wondrfuly written.It is sad...espesialyy the last sentence...makes me wanto to yell ' Hey !!He is in the Coliseum!" I hope this is not the it and that you write up untill they end up together.Cloud does deserves it don't you think?

This is interesting. I like it! Please continue!

awesome story! Continue writing, I love it! You are an awesome writer1 Bravo! 3 stars1 oh, by the way, please R&R my fics soon. I have a goal: get bunches of reviews from great writers like you!