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Irina89
2006-05-16
ch 18,
abuseJack mad, bad guy. Irina good guy. Sydney and Vaughn finally happy together. Hey I love it.
But, -yeah, I know but- if you're going to use french don't kill it like that. What you wrote made actually no sense at all. Poor language, you shot it in the heart. I believe the words you were looking for where: "Le Fallacieux" (even if personally I wouldn't use that word)
agentpinksyrup
2006-03-05
ch 16,
abusethis story is great! you know, Sydney and Vaughn do get engaged at the end of the fourth season. i've read most of your stories and I love them! Keep writing!
anonymous
2004-11-16
ch 18, anon.
abuse"Kelly is Agent Bristow’s child. Hers and Agent Vaughn’s. Anyone asks how, I’ll lock you up for stupidity and indelicacy."

I loved that part!
Rach5
2004-11-16
ch 18,
abuseGreat Stroy! loved it. was soo sweet towards the end! Loved it.
Eyghon
2004-11-16
ch 17, anon.
abuseI must say I'm a little disappointed, I feel like something is missing, the end is so sudden ! But I loved the crazy Jack part, priceless !
Rach5
2004-11-15
ch 17,
abusegreat chapter. so sweet. cant wait for the final chapter now.
want to know what will happen to JAck!! and also kelly, syd and vaughn:) more soon! :)
Eyghon
2004-11-15
ch 17, anon.
abuseyay ! Loved it, I was expecting some Kelly/Irina because I missed this in the last chapter. That was perfect, Sark, Syd/Vaughn...
Can't wait !
piglet
2004-11-14
ch 16, anon.
abuseYou've got a great story here. I especially like the spontaniousness (is that a word?) of that marriage proposal. I totally didn't see that coming. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
scorpiowolf
2004-11-13
ch 15, anon.
abuseKelly is so cute!

You have no idea how happy i am that Vaughn is her father instead of sark...
Shae
2004-11-13
ch 15, anon.
abuseKelly's great- I think it perfectly fine that a three-yr old would just take everything in stride; we're at our most adaptable at that stage, and not so set in our ways

Syd makes such a great mother, and since I completely adore Irina and miss her on the show itself, I think she is perfect as the good guy in this whole thing!

More soon please
Eyghon
2004-11-13
ch 15, anon.
abuseThis is so cute ! Yeah you did a pretty good job, I have no trouble seeing Kelly as a real person, she's great !
She's gonna spend a few days with Irina (wonder what she'll call her), I LOVE that idea !
And I can't wait to see Jack's ** kicked.
Thanks for updating so fast, I was very impatient, and still am.
That was a very good chapter, you're amazing !
Eyghon
2004-11-11
ch 14, anon.
abuseI am in awe before your work ! This is just perfect, I love everything. I guess it would have been too harsh to kill Jack, he could be useful, like for Syd to kill him herself (this is the character I hate the most, he's worse than Sloane in my opinion).

Can't wait for Syd's reaction, and I LOVED Kelly "Sydney's gonna be mad", so funny, smart girl !

Please update soon !
Rach5
2004-11-11
ch 14,
abusegreat chapter. i hope irina does give kelly back to sydney.
love this story.
regan
2004-11-09
ch 13, anon.
abuseNot any critique here - just wanted to say this story is quite interesting. You are allowing your characters to be intelligent and less than perfect. So hooray to you! Love the interaction between Vaughn, Sydney and Kelley - in all directions. Like Irina to the rescue and Jack being heavily the bad guy. I will definitely check back and see how you continue with this. Thanks for putting this story out there!
tropicalwahini1
2004-11-08
ch 13,
abuseHi! I wrote to you before as Isabelle but now i ahve an account, i actually posted a story Searching for Nothing about Alias. but oh my god your story is so good, i'm not sure who is on what side, what is going to happen with Kelly, and more importantly i think that the surrogate mother is going to come into play. Ugh! your story is so good, i am so excited everytime i see that you posted another chapter. I can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work!

p.s. i wonder is Sloane is gonna arrive as a key player
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