_ *applauds all three*

That was really well written.Beautiful job.

so beautiful

Your writing flows beautifully, and your metaphors are lovely. Though I rather doubt innocent little Ami would be engaged in passionate "love-making" before marriage. It seems somewhat out of character. Everything else is wonderful. You should consider writing similar things in poetry form. Yes, I apologize for using the word "things" but I couldn't think of a better word.

Anyway, please update soon!

Merry Faerie

Your writing flows beautifully, and your metaphors are lovely. Though I rather doubt innocent little Ami would be engaged in passionate "love-making" before marriage. It seems somewhat out of character. Everything else is wonderful. You should consider writing similar things in poetry form. Yes, I apologize for using the word "things" but I couldn't think of a better word.

Anyway, please update soon!

Merry Faerie

Beautiful Story!

This was so beautiful. I can't wait to read more.

That was nice. Look forward for more of this story soon.

Oh, wow... You're right, it is sad. Not necessarily the saddest story I've read, but one of the most.

Its so poetically and romantically sad! I love it, I absoluetly love it! I am Inuyashafires sister...ironic about our names, is it not? I figured I would see what he was raving about saying your a great writer...Well he was right, and im glad I looked. Wonderful, you have a real talent.

Wah... bootyful! I luved ittt! xP Duo's bettah! *sticks Zechs in a can* _;; Shinigami No Aijin

omg! (ouch my throat) that is too sad. this goes under favorites

Oh, What a sad story. You wrote Zoisite and Ami beautifully. Looking forward to more stories about those too. Bye

very nice.

this is good. sad and sweet.