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| itsasledgehammer 2006-09-18 ch 2,  | abuseAw! That chapter was even better than the first. Dylan and Marco are just like...what love is. In that show, I think they're the only couple (or one of the only) that actually LOVE each other...except for the whole Dylan cheating on Marco thing. But even then, I wanted them to get back together. I mean, when Craig cheated on Ash I didn't want THEM back together...and I def didn't want Craig and Manny back together. But ANYWAYS, great chapter! UPDATE! |
| itsasledgehammer 2006-09-18 ch 1, | abuseHoly **...that chapter was amazing. I never really thought about what Ellie must have REALLY felt when Marco started dating Dylan...and then falling in love with him. I mean, she DID really like Marco, and then Marco was all like "I'm gay" and she just kinda dealt with it. Its happened to me before, and I know how much it can suck knowing someone you really like, who would just LOVE you if he weren't gay. "Good. Let the little maggot die." lol, best part. But omg, Marco and Dylan are too cute! |
| pkw 2005-08-02 ch 2, anon. | abusevery good thus far -- so, who's next? thanx for sharing |
| Serenity Wintirs 2005-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI like this story. I am adding it to my c2 archive. (and I want my Halloween candy) |
| Blood Angel 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow...*speechless* That was amazing. You write so well! I could really feel the love--and jealousy too:P -sighs- DxM are so cute |
| iheartdotdotdot 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI LOVED this. You rock at doing Ellie's POV. I've been looking all over for a good Ellie POV storie and you had it! Thank you! You rock at it. Write more Ellie POV soon. |
| drew's baby 2004-10-13 ch 2, | abuseyou don't have to give me candy or pie.I love your stpory without the rewards.lol.It's uber-awsome/! |
| amricangrl 2004-10-13 ch 2, | abuseThis is a very good story! I hope you continue with this story. |
| freakzoid247 2004-10-13 ch 2, | abuseI love any story that includes Dylan as a younger version, even if it wasn't a good time for him. I liked it, please continue, next time with Dylan or Marco's POV! Yeah yeah!! |
| Val-Creative 2004-10-12 ch 2, | abuseI'm sorry, I have to review Ellie's chapter instead of the Paige's. I've got 5 words to say to you, missy. YOU ARE A GODDAMN GENIUS! I don't know how you did it, but you made me wanna cry and laugh at the same time when I read Ellie's words. Probably because I'm kinda feeling the same way as she is. All I can say as I stare in shock as this WONDERFUL piece of writing, I'm in love with this. You SHOULD REALLY write more Ellie POV, you are brillant at it. I like your Paige's chapter too, but I always favored Ellie over Paige. ^-^ Why the hell didn't I ever find this before?! -smacks head- ~ Val |
| trucalifornian 2004-10-12 ch 2, anon. | abusecandy apples...yum. you did an awesome job getting Pagie's pov. same with ellie's. are you gonna do anymore chapters? Spinner? Craig? Manny? Emma? Ashley? etc. (It could go on and on.) I hope you do more chapters. ~*Adri*~ |
| StorytellerD 2004-10-12 ch 2, | abuseI liked both chapters. I thought you did good at capturing Ellie's POV in the first part. The second chapter didn't seem so focused on the jealousy theme (at least how I read it), but I think it works well as a story focusing on a strong sibling relationship. I'm interested to see what other character(s) you might focus on next. |
| jasmonet 2004-10-12 ch 2, | abuseOh I love it. This is great. |
| katie 2004-10-12 ch 2, anon. | abusecandy apples and pumpkin pie!! Good Job keep going! love alyays, katie |
| XxXCocoPuffXxX 2004-10-12 ch 2, | abusei want my pumkin pie now since i reviewed |