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people-alwayz-leave
2008-06-23
ch 31,
abuseDid you know that Chapter 30 cuts off in the middle?
Supernaturally Angelic
2008-04-04
ch 59,
abuseDear God
when i started reading this story I was certainly not a sarkney fan
but lets face facts here
you converted me
it's that simple
and plus converting me is never that hard
Lenari
2007-12-27
ch 59,
abuseThis was absolutely amazing! A great ending to a great story.

Thanks for the ride.

~Lenari
twilight09
2007-09-29
ch 59,
abuseGreat job, congratulations on the ending, I would have liked a bit more info but thats okay. Hope to read your other stories soon.
twilight09
2007-09-29
ch 58,
abuseThats so cute that Sydney is complantating this, and I love that Sark wants this as well. Great Job!
twilight09
2007-09-29
ch 57,
abuseOMG Sydney and Sark having a kid, now that is a shocker, will it happen? I dont like that they want to use Andrea that way it is a very heavy load for a child so young to carry.
twilight09
2007-09-29
ch 56,
abuseGreat Chapter and Andrea is a little genius wow. Great job!
TfA-Fan
2007-09-28
ch 59,
abuseWow, the ending is amazing. I love your story from the first to the last chapter. Really great. Thanks for this fantastic story.
midnights-daughterMD47
2007-09-26
ch 59,
abuseThat was amazing! I loved it a lot. It letft an almost cliff-hanger and I'll definitely check into your other stories. Three years and you finished. English is your second language, and if I say so myself, I'm very happy and proud of you. I have to through and read this again, just because. It's always kinda hard to picture Sark and Syd in an actual relationship, but you did it. You gradually did the transer, it was amazing.
Long Live Nelly
2007-09-26
ch 59,
abuseI absolutely love this story and I'm SO glad you finished it! I was really worried it would remain incomplete.

I love Sarkney stories, and this one is so good, with an excellent plot and a lovely ending. I'm not one for fluffy happy ever afters, but this one fits so well.

I would never have guessed English was not your first language. This story is amazing.

Thanks for such pleasurable reading,
Long Live Nelly
AMBERLEAH
2007-09-26
ch 59,
abusegreat ending...it's been a fantastic story to read and a great ride.
aeletha
2007-09-26
ch 59,
abuseOh I so loved the ending. There's nothing like a happy one.

I am so impressed that this was your first fiction in english. I enjoyed the plot and the story completely. Even though it is long it seemed to go smoothly from chapter to chapter.

I am so wonderfully glad that you finished it at all. There is so much out there that is incomplete.

Thanks again for putting all the time into finishing this fantastic story.
src13
2007-09-26
ch 59,
abuseI loved the ending. When I first started reading I thought that I would want her back with Vaughn, but the more I read, the more I wanted her with Sark instead. Great job on the story.
midnights-daughterMD47
2007-09-20
ch 57,
abuseUpdate! Update! Update! That was so freaking amazing!
src13
2007-09-20
ch 57,
abuseI actually feel bad for Sark. While I know that they definitely have very good reasons for not trusting him with the girl, the poor guy's gotten attached to her now.
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