this is boring

cool! update soon :)

Wow..I haven't finish your story but it already gives me the chills! I love the plot and everything ^^) I'll still go read your story and finish this ^^)

i really enjoyed both stories you created. i think the alternate was a tiny bit better, just because sakura didn't die. i cant wait to read more stories from you.

galing ah. nice story..

Hey, I'm a new reader and i find your story satisfying though I'm a bit concerned about the subject-verb agreement in your sentences. It's alright though, hmm...maybe a beta would help? I have the same problems. BTW, i'm a filipina too

oh gosh! someone screaming IS quite depressing, come to think of it. but an excellent piece of work, nonetheless. i feel horrible for sasuke =(

a nice story. I very much like it.
thank you for spending time writting.

best of luck

Long but I enjoyed your story...Well written...
I preferred the happy ending story even the other one was very good too... I am just a sucker for good romance so I like happy endings...
Anyway, really like this story a lot. because Sasusaku is my favorite pair, actually the only pair I read.
Thanks for the story & many more to come...
Good job!

ok i liked the story so far but now tht sakura died i think i might cry if i read the rest. i bet its a great story but i can't read it. too sad me dont lik to cry TT_TT

interesting : )

aww! you're story is so nice! it has a really nice ending. and i agree with you too. i kinda admit that the first story was better than this one. ;]

ahaha! lemon. :] well. anyway. nice chapter.

nice chapter. sasuke really have a soft side. :] keep writing more stories. you're an excellent author.

i'm almost finished at your story. YOU ROCK! i've never seen some work of this. it's truly amazing. but, i kinda flinched when sakura died. :] well. that's all anyway. keep writing.