This was so well written, so detailed I hope i'll be able to write like this one day.

awesome,disturbing but awesome. Great description,I wish i could write like that.Keep up the good work.

That was sick and twisted...but still I liked it. You did a great job of writing a very hard scene, well done >^.^

HOLY MACORONI! Now THAT is different! Good description though! is raziel gonna hafta suffer like that for eternity? hmm... next time be a bit more cheery please? Like a story bout Zephon getting drunk

Zephon: ugh... my life is a contant hangover...

Me: Dats da spirit, and spking of spirits...

Zephon: YAY! BEER!

write more please

damn i love it! abnd it's good to find another LOK fan ^_^x too bad it's just a one chapter story...

Greetings, I am the Unwanted Ghost of Kildiazar. I have read many stories of Legacy of Kain and I find that your story is the first one I have actually deemed worthy of reviewing. I am a very morbid being and I must say your story has satisfied my sadistic mind. Very few stories, if any, that I have read truly reach your story's level of satisfaction. I congratulate you on your fine work. I trust that you will write more wonderful stories. In the meantime, keep up the amazing work.

Uh. dunno what it was with the zombie things chomping him up. It's well written, which is good. But right now I don't know what this will be about much, or what the point was. But hey nice story anyways

Hiya! I'm not mad, I'm chuffed you've returned! Haven't heard from you in ages! Loved the story but in future, please try not to confuse chibi Kain, he's only little. Keep writing! x

That was disturbing. *nauseous*