a good story...i like it...
but i think its tragedy...why do they have to die?but i think its also sweet because i guess its an ENDLESS LOVE..hehehe
nice one.
next time you wrote story, i hope it will have happy ending...hehehe
keep up the good work!

cool! it's kind of like one of uh... a band's music video.. the song that goes like "Now the story's played out like this, just like a paperback novel, lately there's been too much of this, we could end up ..staying.."// something like tat. it's almost the same thing, except it's a girl leaving and the guy dead. hm. good story!:D

Ah. It does, and I think it's good, save for little errors. :) Keep up, and keep the RuHana/HanaRu alive. *v*

oro? i am still confused. haha. i mean so are they like together in the living world or together in the dead world? o.O

Woah! I simply love the ending! Awesome!

hi happy hanaru day too... my, my...i should be shamed of myself...i forgot it was THE time yesterday! huhuhu...anyways hope Hana and Ru can forgive me...
well, the story is short but nice...well written...
=)

you cant remember? I can. its that video "Someday" by Nickelback. i loved that video. the ending was a real shocker, just like the ending of your story. hehe

? Ok, I got the first bit but it kinda got confusing near the end. But anyway, great take on this story, just make sure you know what you are writing (assume that the readers know nothing about the plot, ok?). But pls. keep it up.