Very original and clever. I like your take on serial killers.

That was a really great story. What I especially loved was that Sara pretty much broke and solved the case, instead of turning her into the next victim. Very nice job. Always love G/S.

This was a very interesting case! Nice ending too!

Beautiful. Nicely characterized and wrapped up. I would have liked a bit more from the killer's perspective at the end but I'm kind of odd that way. Thanks for finishing it.

This was a very interesting casefile. Quite a unique and creepy serial killer. I really liked Grissom's gesture at the end.

Well, this was a great casefile fic. Smart, interesting and exciting to read. I really enjoyed it. The ending was sweet and perfect. Great job!

This was such a sweet ending to a very intense story. I enjoyed all of it.

This was a great casefile: well-thought out, in character and challenging enough to keep me interested! I definitely think you should write more of them, because not many writers have the knack of doing them well, and you do!

This story is great! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

this story is amazing so far. you have me utterly hooked. you are an excelent writer. i can't wait to read more.

This story is riveting! I am hooked. I am properly repulsed by your "William Faulkner"--what a creepy serial killer and nemesis for the team. I feel like I am reading an actual episode script. The characterization is flawless and I love that element of G/S awareness and attraction of course. Great job.

Great chapter! Can't wait fo' mo'...

I'm really enjoying this story; I think it's highly original and well written. The casefile is gripping, if not a little horrifying! I'm anxious to find out if Sara will be a future victim and if Grissom will come to her rescue.

I like how you have picked up the pacing, much like a serial killer would.

The serial rapist character is written so well. I get chills reading this. Poor Greg! That was a very interesting twist!