I very much like your choice of narrator, she brings a practical eye to this great tragedy. A wonderful piece of writing.

What sticks with me is the end:
"With a heavy sigh, I push up my sleeves, and set back to work."

It's such a strange feeling, the way life goes on after a tragedy. *shivers*

I'm impressed with this. You take a minor, minor character and bring her to life, and give a different perspective on such a well-known story. Wow.

Great story idea! Well-written and interesting.

I love how you take a character with about 2 lines in the actual story and make her real. Interesting that she was one of many women who fell in love with Turin, but he could only love the one who was forbidden to him.

You've done a wonderful job with this piece and the unnamed woman, fleshing her out and connecting her with the story. It's absolutely phenomonal writing and a superb story.