I really enjoyed this story it was also suspensefull and full of action

This is the second time I read this story and loved it! Then I realized I never reviewed it...so now I am! Great story!

Your story was GREAT!

that was pretty cool. anything with jack in it is great hope to see more

This is my first attempt at reading fanfiction and trying to review. I thought something was up when Steve got out of the hospital and noticed Jack getting into his car and wondering how he got down ahead of him. The one thing I noticed when you mentioned the warehouse you neglected to give the location so how did the real Jack find out where Steve was? Overall it was a good story and I look forward to reading more of your stories. I am a great fan of DM and was sorry to see Jack leave but also enjoy Jesse. Good luck on future stories.

This story is great! Anything with Jack I guess :) and I love Jack, Jesse and Cheryl in the same fic...

Thanks for writing this. Lucky Ladybug. I enjoyed reading it.