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| Marie Kenobi 2007-06-26 ch 19, | abuseOMG...I do hope you know this tops the list of worst cliffhangers ever posted on I'm still *throughly* enjoying this story and your writing style and ideas. If ever there was a form of torture out there, I think you covered it all with poor Lancelot. Yikes! Please say there will be an update soon? *Puppy dog face* |
| Marie Kenobi 2007-06-20 ch 6, | abuseOh, this is really proving to be good so far. This is an *EXCELLENT* story that I think deserves more reviews than it has! You've kept the characters miraculously in movie-verse character, something lots of people attempt and come close to but don't succeed to the level that you have. I think what I like best about this story is that it makes SENSE. The way the characters are reacting to their situations *make sense.* Lancelot has the brains to somewhat fear the situation he's in; your Lance isn't the all-mighty god of sarcastic perfectionism. He is sarcastic and he does still hold that haughty air about him, but it's so much more believable. There! That's the word I've been looking for. Your characters are *believable.* Love the story! I'm off to read more! :-D |
| music nimf 2007-06-02 ch 19, | abuseOh it's been such a long time since I started reading this, but I'm all caught up now. Your imagry (sorry for spelling mistakes. I'm a little tired right now to fix them) is grusome and gives a great affect as to what the knights are feeling. I hope that Lancelot get a break in the next chapter. Heavan knows he could use one.Bye! |
| Lancey 2007-03-25 ch 19, anon. | abuseOh my god! What a wonderful fanfiction! I Love the H/C! Please more of that and soon! |
| lauren hedgehog 2007-02-16 ch 19, anon. | abuseaw...another wonderfully written chapter :-) I really like the h/c stuff :-D |
| Megan 2007-02-16 ch 18, anon. | abuseThe story's good. Keep going! |
| wheresmybible 2007-02-16 ch 18, anon. | abuseI'm so glad you updated! I almost thought you weren't going to complete this story. Excellent chapter! Poor Lancelot, I hope he gets better. Please update soon! |
| Jemiul 2007-02-15 ch 18, | abusea fantastic chapter. I love it. Keep up the great work. Jemiul |
| Mew 2007-02-15 ch 18, anon. | abuseNot bad, I enjoyed this, but I will say that the torture is a bit over dramatic in that it's almost virtually impossible to survive something like that. Plus it seemed more like just piling on whatever came to mind to make it as horrific as possible rather than having it be calculated. Other than that, not bad. |
| lauren hedgehog 2007-02-15 ch 18, anon. | abuseYay! Another wonderful chapter! The characters and their reactions were all believable. I'm enjoying your story very much and I'm very happy it's been updated :-) |
| Steffi 2006-11-14 ch 17, anon. | abuseThis was a good story please, continue with it soon. |
| Lancelotfan 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseI just came across this story! I love it! Great Great exciting story. Oh Please please though don't leave poor Lancelot there for long. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you! |
| lauren hedgehog 2006-10-31 ch 17, | abuseYay! :-D Another great chapter. Very dark, and a little scary - I will admit to skimming over a bit of the Lancelot whumping ;-) - but a satisfying chapter none the less :-) |
| plead just to no 2006-09-27 ch 16, | abuseupdate plese *gives puppy dog eyes* i LOVE the story |
| jordiesog 2006-08-08 ch 5, | abuseAWSOME! loved it! but the onelt thind is that it needs more TRISTEN. i really liked the thing whith his hawk. cause he would have thought of that. so, plz write more TRISTEN. thats all bye! :] |