 Vicis 2009-11-08 . chapter 1I adore it. Beautiful, just like your other stories.
~V. |
 ReganBaxter 2009-04-24 . chapter 1This was a really good challenge-fic. I don't understand why you won't do one again. This one is amazing, especially the POV. You don't see it alot in things anymore.
I really, really like this.
-RB |
 mira mirth 2008-10-21 . chapter 1Very nice. I really like the structure - the first, second and third person PoV clearly designated for Dumbledore, Snape and Harry. That was rather cleverly done =) and creative, too. I like the slow buildup of Harry's and Snape's relationship. I'm not sure about the last, epilogue-ish section - on the one hand, it's nice to know what has happened in the end, but on the other, it detracts a little from the smooth flow of the rest of the story. You assume, from the last line of the previous section, that Harry and Snape are going to be fine and that he will eventually kill Voldie, so the epilogue is saying nothing new, really... but that's just my humble opinion =) Good job, anyway, with the new and interesting approach! |
 candydive 2008-10-07 . chapter 1i really like how this is written in dumbledores point of view~
its somewhat refreshening ヾ(。・ω・。)ノ゙ |
 ttt 2008-07-05 . chapter 1 Wow that was spectacular! First off, your point of view was certainly unique. It must have been quite a challenge, but you definitely pulled it off. Second, I could sense the emotions, even though you wrote sparingly on them. Your short sentences conveyed everything that I needed to know.
I got tingles when I read the ending, because conclusions always leave me happy. Especially dumbledore's last sentence. =) I really enjoyed the story! Good job. |
 conclusivelead. 2008-06-07 . chapter 1it took me much longer than it usually does to read this story. i can whiz through a fic this size most of the time in about a half an hour, but for some reason i ended up reading this over the span of a couple days.
i think it was mostly due to the fact that i originally though that this was a eulegy written by dumbledore for snape, and therefore didn't want to involve myself too wholly, or else get all depressed when i was proved right and snape WAS dead.
fortunately, i was incorrect, and this is a marvelous fic. the point of view gets a bit confusing every now and again, but i still enjoyed it marvelously. definitely a favorite.
- s.t.b. |
 CrazyObbsesiveBoredOublec42Luv 2008-02-17 . chapter 1I really liked the writting style of the story and thought in very, how should I say, attention holding. |
 kaiba-queen 2006-10-23 . chapter 1Beautiful. Written from an interesting perspective, but beautiful none the less. |
 polabear 2006-09-10 . chapter 1aww this was sweet~~ i don't usually like reading second person stories, but this was good~~ |
 Dulce 2006-03-24 . chapter 1 I really liked this story, though I don't particularly enjoy the use of first person for narration. |
 animeangel088 2005-10-14 . chapter 1write more fics! |
 Miss Eliza Azraelian 2005-07-26 . chapter 1It was very interesting, being told from Dumbledore. It was simple. It didn't play the readers emoptions, right now I'm glad for that. I liked it. Alot. Thank you.
-o-cilla-o- |
 Lady Azar de Tameran 2005-04-26 . chapter 1Wow!
Ever Hopeful,
Azar |
 CannonFodder 2005-02-03 . chapter 1Very enjoyable one-shot. It may have been difficult to write, but it read very easily. Great job. |
 Shaldana Blackwater 2004-12-28 . chapter 1This was very nicely done. I was a little put off by the POV, but I kept reading and realised that it works rather nicely.
It's a very soft fic, almost fuzzy, but still with enough prickle to keep it interesting.
A very gentle & smooth read, and very well told. |